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Spike is distraught. The love of his life remains constantly out of his reach. His attempts at romance crash and burn like the Horsenburg airship. As the gala draws near, he enlists Blueblood to help in wooing Rarity once and for all. Little do they know that another mare already has her eye on Spike, not to mention a plan to snatch him up first. -Heart to Heart Sequel-

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Now this is very interesting indeed. I've already enjoyed several of your stories, so I know this'll be good, Twispike is already a huge plus and it's Twilight's crush. Yep, this'll be good.

a sequel to Heart to Heart? :pinkiegasp:
OH HELL YEAH! :rainbowwild:
i can't wait until the girls find out that Twilight and Spike were/are engaged? TwiSpike FTW :moustache::heart::twilightsmile:

Max

SPILIGHT MAKE THIS SPILIGHT FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA!!

Fantastic work with the fanfic keep it up man. You have scored a like, a fave and a follow if I can find the follow button on the iPhone. Keep it up

This is going to be Twispike so fast, but even if I was hoping for some Sparity or better still Twisparity, I have to admit that this is hilarious.

Try not to make Rarity a bitch.

For the sake of novelty, I would like to see a well written Twilight x Blueblood.
The story could go with the moral that: "We dont always get what we pine for, but sometimes, it can lead so something better".

Atleast I would think it as a unique twist.

*Shrugs* Just my late night ramblings.

OMG!!!

This is shaping up to be hilariously delicious!! Twilight's got a crush on Spike, Spike's got a crush on Rarity,, Rarity's got a crush on Blueblood, Blueblood isn't ---I repeat, ISN"T--a douche and is actually the cool as hell but slightly obviious cousin/relative, and Cadence's about to be put into a difficult situation again, just like last time when she was telling Spike about love.

Not to mention that it's being played just like in its sequel Heart To Heart that Celestia is Spike's mommy, making Blueblood and Cadence Spike's cousins...excellent!!!
And it's cute that it's ultimately a Spilight, but not just a Spilight, but that Spike is actually going to inadvertantly help Blueblood get Rarity as her special somepony. Usually, Blueblood is so negatively characterized that it's really hard to see him as more than an arrogant pseudo-noble. In essence, one prince is going to help another prince get a certain princess, when there is another princess (not Cadence) that is looking for her prince to finally realize the coffee.

Sensually Delicious!!! :raritystarry::raritystarry::raritystarry:

Faved, upvoted, and commented!!! My elements to an instant classic in my book!!

Can't wait for more!!!!

I haven't seen a romance-fic of this caliber in quite a while. I'm glad you posted this :ajsmug:
And dat Twilight freaking out and envisioning the future scene... great stuff man, great stuff.

Genius!! I have been so tired of reading Blueblood as a complete and total dick, to see him in this light. Not as a dick, prick, or a bane on ponykind. Here he seems believable, nice, overwhelmed by the crowns burden. See nice!!
Now this was littered with references to heart-to-heart and this started out nice and ended amazingly. I always have a worry that sequels never measure up to the first but this... This is a rival!!

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WE NEED MORE BLUEBLOOD LOVE!

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I agree... But there must be more character development. This is a refreshing view on Blueblood, not only because he is a good guy, but because he is portrait so well. I've read fics where Blueblood was... Decent, but his character development was... Awful. Here the ball is high in the air... Let's see if it swishes the hoop.

Oh, yeah. It will so be good.:raritystarry:

This is awesome. And also the most entertaining explanation for Blueblood's upcoming treatment of Rarity I've seen. :twilightsmile:

I congratulate you on making the featured page! :raritywink: I hope to hear much more good news and stories from you! :twilightsmile:
-ElementOfHope

Blueblood is actually nice and not a dick? Interesting. And adding spice to this mix is the risk of Twilight going yandere.

Your characterizations are simply wonderful.

I'm surprised at how natural the events came off in this chapter. Really, great job advancing and setting up the plot of this story. Doing it through Character motives, rather than arbitrary events no less.

Here's a Fave, and thumb. I adored the "Heart To Heart" story, heres hoping for an even greater experience!

Awww yeah. Love me some romantic comedy action where everypony just misunderstands everything.

Lets have everyone's plan meet Murphy's law and crash and burn.

Funny as hell and looking good. I'm mos def on the band-wagon for this one.

Much as I'm loving the Spilight here, Cadance's departure from Blueblood's office, and her double-punchline, was the highlight for me. :rainbowlaugh: It would certainly be hilarious if her history with Spike factored into the crazy situation those four are building around themselves.

Heart to Heart sequel?!
Hell yes, but I have to read later.:applecry:
Need sleep:ajsleepy:.

A Spilight, Cadence is still traumatized, Blueblood isn't a douche,
and this a direct sequel to 'Heart to heart'.
This is going to be good.

I can't wait for more of this. It is great to see Blueblood written as a 3 dimensional character instead of a flat 1-D asshole. Also thrilled to see some SpikeXTwilight and hopefully some RarityXBlueblood. I know they are not the most popular pairs, but I am still glad to see them.

2606261 Dude, everything you just said. I think this is the scenario I love the most. I was at first a little taken aback of the fact that Blueblood wasn't the infamous deuche and at first I wasn't sure I even liked him as a good guy, maybe I just loved to hate him iunno....

Anyway, it's still the mommy :trollestia: I appreciate the most in Crosis' little universe, as Faust herself sees it this way but most don't. Also, never has the concept of Spilight :twilightsmile:x:moustache: sounded more palpable for me than in this fic. Thank you, Crosis. You're the #1 author in my book. :moustache:

I suppose I'll have to go against the grain and hope that this ends up a Spike/Rarity fic with perhaps some Twilight/Blueblood in it. Frankly, I've never cared for the way Spilight always seems to be born mostly out of Twilight's desperation and fear of being alone, but given your past works, and this excellent first chapter, I have high hopes.

Looks like Twilight never really forgot about the proposal when they were young. And with Celestia being Spike's mother figure, Twilight is kinda allowed by both law and mindset to go after Spike. Interesting, glad to see a sequel.

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Your opinion is very refreshing. I myself am a Sparity shipper, but I also adore some serious Spilight. The reason for both of them to me is that in ways, both relationships between Spike and either Rarity or Twilight are semi-canon, or at least subtly implied. Whether the writers that are working on Season 4 have it set up, it will be emotional, somewhat romantic, and above all else, CUTE and FUNNY!!!

I do think that Season 4 will actually have one of the two go from semi-canon to full canon for Spike, and right now it still seems to be a dead heat. Of course, when we have figured it out, I bet they're gonna be trolls and make Fluttershy Spike's canonical special somepony.......hmmm, the chaos would be delicious....

Sorry, off track. :twilightsheepish: TL, DR: I like both ships, I want one of them to be official, and I think Blueblood should get the one that Spike doesn't get.

Intruiging...

I've never been one for Twike in a romantic sense (I generally go for mother/son there) but as part of a love quadrangle-comedy of errors with Rarity and Blueblood? Brilliant!

“I’D RATHER BE KIDNAPPED BY CHANGELINGS,” Cadence screamed before turning and galloping down the hall as if Cerberus himself were in pursuit.

Soon...
So... Twilight -> Spike -> Rarity -> Blueblood -> ??? Oh the delicious shenanigans that will ensue.

Winter Song: Wait isn't Twilight and Spike like a mother and son? This would be pretty weird if they would be together.

They aren't really biologically related so this is not weird at all.

Winter Song: Oh yeah... Wait that still disturbing.

“I’D RATHER BE KIDNAPPED BY CHANGELINGS,” Cadence screamed before turning and galloping down the hall as if Cerberus himself were in pursuit.

You asked for it! :trollestia:

Riz

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YEAH TWISPIKE !!! :pinkiehappy:

Wait, so Spike is engaged to his surrogate mother? That's a bit creepy.

A Sequal to Heart to Heart?

:rainbowlaugh:Now this I got to read!:rainbowlaugh:

I'm so loving this story already!:pinkiehappy:
This feels like at will have more laughs then Heart to Heart, great job!
And I love the way you have all the characters developing a this story. Very believable, even Blueblood.:trollestia:
Can't wait for the next chapter.:moustache:

So this is a retelling of the Gala episode. I ended up getting an idea that Prince Blueblood acted like a jerk to Rarity on purpose to help Spike, isn't that a crazy thought? ^^;

Oh man, this is AWESOME! I can't wait to read more

The universe has a sadistic sense of humor...

TwiBlood and RariSpike!!!!! DOOO EEEEEETTTTT!!!!

This story is conflicting with my emotions and opinions:derpyderp1:
BUT I MUST KEEP READING BECAUSE IT'S WONDERFUL!:pinkiehappy::flutterrage::twilightsmile::pinkiecrazy:

The second time I read this, I realized that the parents had the house to themselves?

Mr. Sparkle: Yea!
Mrs. Sparkle: Shinines coiming...
Mr. Sparkle: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Heart to Heart sequel? You know I'm sticking around now. :ajsmug:

You actually made me like Blueblood. That's hard to do. I like his relationship with Candance and Spike

I wish Twilight luck. Signs are there that Blueblood is interested in Rarity.

AL

hahhhaaha very funny !!:pinkiehappy:

Riz

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Who are you talking about ?

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i don't know where you got an idea like that? Faust herself said Celestia raised Spike so she is his mother and Spike himself said Twilight is not the mommy in winter wrap up, so please explain to us why you think they are mother and son when it goes against everything the creator and canon tell us :unsuresweetie:

note: i'm not trying to start a fight or flame war, i just want to know why people think this

So maybe Blueblood's plan to help Spike is to act like a giant deuchebag to Rarity like we saw in Best Night Ever.

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Twilight Sparkle

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We see Twilight Sparkle hatch Spike.
They have more of a sister/brother dynamic I suppose, although at times it does seem more like mother/son. Like in the crystal empire when spike is worried Twilight will leave him as his biggest fear.

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right then lets see what we got here! :pinkiehappy:

We see Twilight Sparkle hatch Spike.

mearly hatching his egg does not mean motherhood, word of god has Celestia raising and taking care of him, Twilight was a filly just starting school, she had no way of raising or providing for Spike in any shape or form, and as before Spike himself does not view Twilight as a mother figure

They have more of a sister/brother dynamic I suppose, although at times it does seem more like mother/son.

i can somewhat agree on the bro/sis dynamic but i see it more as two close childhood friends, also i've yet to see anything that would be classed as a mother/son interaction

Like in the crystal empire when spike is worried Twilight will leave him as his biggest fear.

again i do not see anything that would indicate a mother/son relations, i got more of a 'best friends bond drifting/breaking apart violently' kind of feel, as in Twilight is Spike's oldest and bestest friend, these two have been through thick and thin together, so for her to suddenly no longer wanting anything to do with him is a scary and shocking event, add in his young age and you just make things worse

but anyway i respect your opinion but i will have to disagree with it :twilightsmile:

still friends? :unsuresweetie:

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