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ah Scootaorphan so far i like this fic. (im a sucker for all thing Scoot)
2604207 Ditto
I don't normally laugh aloud at fanfics, but the Derpy bit was golden.
2606116 Happy to hear!
Well to begin with this story gets auto-kudos from me simply for being a ScootaDash fic. I think you did a great job with the pacing of things, and while the idea's not 100% original you approach it in a well thought-out way that feels very appropriate to the show. In that I say well done: one of my harshest criticisms of any fanfiction is when characters behave incorrectly, but you pegged them all right on the head.
As your proofreader I must mention that I'll be going back to the doc and doing a little grammatical fine-tuning to the changes you've made from before. Don't worry, though; nothing I saw was outrageous. I have a few plot points, too, but I'll save them for the shared file since we have one (otherwise this comment would be three times as long!). All in all, this is looking like a great start to a potentially delightful story. Looking forward to chapter 2!
Well you're hitting all my favorite buttons when it comes to a Scoot fic. Can't wait for more.
2606923 Alright, feel free to shoot me a message when you do!
Looks good. Will be keeping an eye on this.
Like it so far. Keep at it
*clears throat* I NEED MORE
please
A sweet story about Dashie and Scoots is always nice to read!
Are you going to continue this one? I would love to see this getting picked up again, it has so much potential!
Your Flying Further and Far Better story is amazing, I can't wait for more chapters soon, I wanna see if Scootaloo will have the ability to fly. Just remember, to take your time and have a nice break from your writing.