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The Wizard of Words
Come what may and test what will, I always find peace in some form of writing. Be it famous, hidden, or simply my own, it is and forever will be a sanctuary.
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24, 014 words? Oh, my~
2601026 Indeed, one shudders to imagine. Fav'ed, wIll read later.
Not bad, not bad at all. I quite like how you spice their dealings, it's nice seeing them each get their turn at caring for the other. Nice bit of humor with Rarity and Spike, and unintentionally Celestia. The letter scene was so well done, I could imagine seeing it on the actual show.
Now, speaking about Rarity, you realize you need to write her misadventures with AJ, right?
Okay, you are still KoC in my book. But I still like the first on better.
Found this:
Shouldn't it be control in this sentence?
Looking forward to the next one...
Noticing a few spelling and grammatical errors. You may want to look into getting a proofreader. If you'd like, I could do that. Otherwise, you'd probably best find one before publishing for the TwiDash Challenge.
...24,000+ words.
"from a game you haven’t heard of." Riiiiiiight, I've definitely never heard of it /s. Actually, I think that soundtrack's been described as "acoustic frontier trip-hop". I love that game.
Whaddaya know? I finished it today!
Wow. Just wow. This story was awesome. You captured character, had lots of good humor, and if that isn't some damn good clop, I don't know what is. The only thing was the minor errors I mentioned.
Overall: fantastic job. You know how picky I am with favorites, especially picky with clopfics, and this is definitely favorite material.
One thing I just thought of halfway through the fic - How are they gonna change back if Twilight doesn't have a horn?
Dat cover image.
BUT DAYUM. That's a lotta words.
The ponies are not that small, unless Twilight and Rainbow Dash are giants. while their actual height is under debate, the most commonly accepted consensus is that the mature ponies stand anywhere from 4'11" to 5 feet even, with Celestia being almost fully horse size at around 8 feet. they are as tall as us.
Welp, gotta get comfy, this will take a while!
2602559 he did find several proof readers. Problem is, 24000 words are a lot of words to edit through, and as is ever so often the case, he released the story before I was done editing
. I'm still editing the tail end of it now, so he can add changes to it. You owe me a Twilestia alt ending to Unrequited for this Wiz! 24 K of TwiDash clop! 24 K! 
BTW, title is "activites"
In the immortal words of one Mr. Takei... oh my.
So, do they even turn back into ponies? Are they stuck like this forever? What happens?
Well... it was good, I'm just a little disappointed there was no actual Sparity. Aside from trying to make Spike completely oblivious to sex even though he usually displays the most common sense, right up there with AJ, and making Rarity lust after A.J.
Awesome story. Thank you for posting it.
You are in my top 5 favorite writers. Thank you so much.
Also..... Bastion Soundtrack FTW!
god damn clopfics
i will get my revenge
Okay, about two hours of reading later I can safely say this.
Hot damn that was hot.
Liked the references to The Study of Dual Female Reproduction. Insta-thumbed and faved. 
Hot diggedy dog. And you just made me remember why the hell I love TwiDash so darn much.
Excuse me while I fav this and read it over and over again.
2603849 I pictured Twi and Dash to be about a head's height taller than Rarity.
Also, my visual depiction of that one scene:
There's one line I'd like to take issue with:
Rainbow was in control. Bad things happened when she was in control.
Thanks to the rest of this story, I'd like to mark this as patently false.
24K words? Jeez, maybe you could split it into chapters? That being said...hoo boy human!TwiDash! This is gonna be good!
This was too awesome for words.
Is it too much to ask for pony-futa-dash and human-twilight?
Now you just need to mix it up a little! FutaDash+HumanTwi?
Also: bastion is best soundtrack//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png Awesome game, but the music is baws.
Why the hell wouldn't I have heard of Bastion? Bastion is one of the best games ever played. Which makes it fit very well with this story, at least in one way.
And it took me this long to read this, WHY?!
I still can't believe I put off reading this till now. Oh well. It was still awesome.
Although I prefer dominant Twilight.
Keep on rolling, Wizard.
This was a great story! I loved it! I disagree with the others about it being too long. The amount of detail put into this was astounding, and it was really lucky for me to have stumbled upon a story this long and with this much quality.
See, I'm a girl, so it can sometimes take for-blooming-ever to, you know...
Sorry if I've just creeped you out, but still! You should be impressed with yourself. It's not often I find a story that can get me this hot under the collar. For lack of any better way to phrase this to sound less uncouth, I literally couldn't keep my hands out of my pants.
You know, usually things being biologically inaccurate completely turns me off, but this was just plausible enough for my brain to interpret it as the best possible thing. I mean, it's really really difficult for a girl to get off without clitoral stimulation, and breasts just aren't that sensitive, but, for once, I wasn't actually thinking about that.
You've managed to do what no one else has. You have made a story so incredibly hot, that I completely ignored any biological inaccuracy! I applaud you.
Seriously, that was really hot.
All the same, I'm glad I didn't actually look at the word count before I started reading this. It would have scared me away
Congratulations on being awesome,
CalculusFilly
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Well, this is the first time a female has appreciated something like this. I am honestly thrilled you enjoyed the story so much. My only hope now is that you don't think I'm some over-weight, over-aged pervert who thinks of this all the time... yeah...
Thank you again for appreciating the story, and for what it's worth, I derived the need for length from a friend of mine who made it VERY clear that for fe/fe relationships, foreplay is key and extensive. One more time, I am not a pervert. Just a dude who likes to see his favorite "logical" ship do more than hug every so often.
You might also like my other story "Dual Female Reproduction," as it is also fairly long and covers a lot of the female relationships, though this is longer and dealing with homo sapiens, not equus ferus.
Once more, thank you again!
No, I definitely don't think you're a creep
And most certainly, foreplay IS –and always will be– key. You seem to have that down quite well! I most certainly love my logic, and with someone like Rainbow Dash, you'll definitely get more than a hug every so often! Granted, that's mostly just my head cannon speaking, but still!
And I've actually read that story, though I was not aware that you had written it! I read it way back before I made this account. Also, your name seems incredibly familiar... I feel like I'm in the process of reading a story that you're writing, but I don't remember which one! I'll search through my bookmarks, and see if I can find it
Once more, I definitely don't think you're a creep! You might be writing these stories, but I'm the one reading them
So yes, you are very welcome! I'm glad that there are people like you writing quality stuff like this.
So chronologically, this came first, then Dual Reproduction?
This is a work of clop art, I loved the detail, the teasing, you were giving me shivers the whole story...it was wonderful
2796474 Overweight, overaged pervert. ;P
Since I've favorited this, I feel the need to comment. This, like The Study of Dual Female Reproduction, was amazing. The amount of detail and the bits of romance were beautiful, the characters were in character, and the dialogue fit well, with the given situation.
You certainly didn't need me to say this (who the hell am I to judge?), but you are an amazing author. I look forward to more of your work.