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darf


pony-writer/pornographer looking for work. old stories undeleted. i'm sorry. Patreon here

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This is good.

Oh, if only. :rainbowkiss:

SO. KINKY. Thank you.

Why are you so good at clop?

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was...

Yes.

Just yes.

YES! We all thank you soooo much for writing this piece. I love seeing these trade and birthday pieces for Cloppie. I know she is going to love this! Keep up the fantastic writing!

Whelp.

Whelp. I'm probably fired.

Still worth it.

EDIT: Also, sweet hell - this is almost all of my fetishes.

Meh I kinda don't like clop story's like this...... but the sex *sigh* was good so have a :moustache:

:D
A NEW DARFIC

Inb4 feature box

Also.. Cool story
...
2615927 And happy birthday TC, may your many years to come be filled with insanity and happy nightmares.:pinkiecrazy:

2615927 Happy birthday Twi!! :heart::rainbowkiss::heart:

Stop it darf, you're banging out fics faster than people can ejaculate to them

2615927 Happiest of Birth dates to you.

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I wish you the best of birthdays Twi!:twilightsmile:

I, for one, cannot wait to read this. To my knowledge, it is surprisingly the only Rainbow X Spitfire story to provide clop.... At least, I'm assuming this story has clop in it.:twilightoops:
Time to read!

Holy fuck this is amazing!

One of the hottest things I've ever read... Amazing work here, author!:raritywink:
I will gladly cum again later.

i.imgur.com/3HX1tpv.png That was pretty hot.

-Hotwingsrule

Iiiiinterestingggggggggggg. That was fucking amazing!

I will read this on a later date.

Although, any and all confidence I had in my 'contribution' to TC's birthday trade-off thing has now been obliterated.

Just like in high school.

c:

There really aren't enough rimming scenes on this site, much less hot fillyfooler ones. :raritystarry:

I will 'cum' and read this later :trollestia:

One of the hottest clopfics I have ever read.

I haven't been reading much of your stuff lately, but I chose a good one to get back into it with.

ma'am?” Dash stood frozen in place, only moving her head in the slightest as she watched Spitfire step closer.

Shouldn't that be capitalised?

Absolute masterpiece! A true work of art! You captured the personality quickly! I may not like THAT MARE who I will not name, but that doesn't make this story amazing! Spectacular! Honestly, I couldn't make one better or even near as good! (P.S. No, I love Spitfire and Rainbow Dash. I hate THOSE ponies who use THOSE things to get through the day. I'll refrain from using any referencing because I'll become angry with rage and most likely do something that'll make many people angry.)

I must admit from the shower story to this one (sue me he's good) spit has a lot of character, while she is not quite as much as a rapist in this one you really have her speak volumes through small actions and sentences. Just let me get my cigarette before I comment on the sexual performance.

AWWE YEAH. DIS GON B GUD NIGGA.

Have all of my Gusta...

... Just take it...

...Take it all, along with my slight feels at the end. Bravo, fagguht, bravo. :trixieshiftright:

Dammit, why can't my fucking coach do this to me? I may not be her favorite butt fuck... I don't think she hates me.

Oh, wow :applejackconfused:
Darf, you're a wonder. I never saw ANYPONY give Dashie a workout like this! :rainbowderp:

Holy fuck. I mean... I can't... I've never really ever shipped Spitfire and Dash that much or anything, and to be honest, storylines like this often drive me away...
JESUS CHRIST ON A BIKE - THIS WAS HOT AS HELL. Fan-fucking-tastic job, dude. Have some mustaches. :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache: :moustache:

Story is written great! but for some reason i can't find myself to enjoy it? :rainbowhuh: I don't know...regardless you get a thumbs up for writing spendidly...

I hate to do this, but

“ma'am?” Dash stood frozen in place, only moving her head in the slightest as she watched Spitfire step closer.

should be capitalized.

:twilightoops: Not that I was re-reading or anything! No, no. Certainly not. :twilightblush:

Oh god, that was hot. There was no love, just raw, unadulterated fucking. I loved every moment of it, and am quite eager to see if there is some kind of follow up. Seeing the usually cocky Rainbow Dash reduced to a submissive, blubbering mess was quite pleasing, in more ways than one. Spitfire is perhaps the only one Rainbow respects enough to let her do that to her. Quite the fantastic show.

Really well done! Only a few minor complaints. There's a few times where you reference previous events, without necessarily confirming whether they are internal to that character or not.

Makes it slightly confusing as to whether this is the first time with them doing it (It doesn't appear to be), but would make the story hotter, or if they are roleplaying it out (as it seems).

Maybe removing these few things would help build more anticipation. They didn't seem to be totally necessary.

Dash knew that was the way Spitfire liked it, at least to start.

She would always wait until she was close, which left Dash torn

There may be a few other spots. It just jolts out of comparison with the rest of the writing. Otherwise, wonderful job!

That was so good I need a ciggerette.

.........................................................................................................wow... If i didn't have any self control, I would have................... in the library:rainbowwild:

:rainbowderp:

I...

I, uh, I don't usually go for lesbian pairings, but...

Hot damn! Consider this faved.

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:rainbowlaugh: found-cha!

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:fluttercry: And here I was, trying to write a similar story, for your b-day... Should I continue with it, or just let it fade back into the darkness?

What the fuck is the point of this?

darf #42 · May 24th, 2013 · · 1 ·

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it's for jerkin' off, bro
it's pretty fun
you should try it some time

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But... to ponies?

Forgive me, I don't mean to judge. Guess it's just taste. I personally find it impossible to get off to something like this, because in my head canon, the characters I picture are a bit more... well, innocent, I suppose.

Regardless of personal preference, it's extremely well-written. There's no point in down voting this story, because it's a pretty damn good story. Clop just isn't my thing, that's all.

2621171 I agree with you! but it is so well written! :twilightblush: still creepy:pinkiecrazy:

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I understand what you are saying. I was against clop for a while, but for some reason, the vivid descriptions do more for me than any poorly made porno ever could. In my mind, as long as you enjoy the writing and the content that is in front of you, it doesn't matter if you rub one off. It just matters to the author that you liked what you read,

2621171 Nothing says you gotta get off to it, mate. This shit is entertaining in the extreme, half the time. Sex is one of the funniest things in the world, aside from all its other attributes ;)

everytime I see a new darf story its like my favorite band just released another single.

Hot damn. A good, horny and tasteful psychological Dom/Sub story. Really liked it. Especially the way you went into the flashback as RD tried to hold her O in. The previous flying around didn't really do it for me, and I had to skip it because I felt it disrupted the otherwise wank-tastic fic. Thank you once again from me and Little-Izzey. :pinkiehappy:

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