We always tend to associate events with emotions if the event or emotion is powerful enough. This holds true for Fluttershy when Mother's Day rolls around.
My first try at writing a story without the use of spoken words. (Picture courtesy of Free-Leaf on Deviantart. Link below)
My submission for a contest DarqFox is holding, enjoy. (Edit: The winner of the contest)
http://free-leaf.deviantart.com/
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That . . . . . . . that wasnt good . . .
It
was
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!
BEAUTIFUL'!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 
SO . . . . . . TOUCHING'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hehe, glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for such kind words
And so it begins. Congratulations. You've gotten the first entry.
I will say that I saw a few little ticks in here like the use of adieu. (adieu is basically a permanent goodbye, whereas au revoir is more of a 'Until we meet again' sort of thing. However, you did manage to wrench my heart, and thus did incredibly well with that aspect. We'll see how you do, friend.
<3 DarqFox
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Curses! Adieu has foiled my plans once again! But none the less, thanks :3
And the first entry huh? Nice
This was absolutely adorable, and not just a little sad. Good job!
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Thanks!
Very bittersweet.
I love it! 
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Thank you :3
Note to self: Do not listen to a new album while reading. Why? This started playing.
Anyways, great story! I didn't get my entry finished in time, though DarqFox did say if I finish it by Monday, I'll be able to post it...
Problem is actually finishing it.
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You can do it!
And thank you :3
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I don't think I'll be able to...
It's only seven minutes from monday (at the time of posting) where I am, and I haven't worked on it in weeks...
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Oh....um...You can...do it?
Reading this NOW!!!!!
MUSTACHE!
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Heh, why yes I am
Hope you enjoy this story as much as you did Despite All Odds
2704980 Just finished, and I must say your writing is just as masterful as it was in that story.
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Aww, you're too kind
This was quite well written on its own terms... but I had trouble accepting that Flutters, after seven years with Twilight, wouldn't already have told her all this. It just doesn't fit with her character. That and a reference to Rarity's mother aside (going by what we see of her in "Sisterhooves Social", I cannot imagine her discussing fashion!) it was a solid enough read. You mostly pulled off the "no dialogue" requirement pretty well, though.
I was engaged in the story until shortly after this point:
I believe that the from this point on, your story is hindered, and not helped by the lack of dialog.