(May 20, 2012: Experimental Story is on Hiatus as I try to write a short story.)
Who is that mare?
What is she smiling about?
Where does she live?
When may I see her again?
Why must she be so mean?
How can she possibly be gone?
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Uh, what is this supposed to be? I don't even...
2603140
Dear Jphyper,
Sorry if the story is confusing as it's unfinished. ^^;
This is my first fan fiction ever.
Back in 2009, I had an idea for a Pokemon story, and I never ended up writing it. Now I'm trying to translate it into a MLP fiction, and I'm having a bit of trouble doing so.
It follows the events of ten characters and what is going through their minds.
Though it may not seem like it, I honestly appreciate your comment.
Cheers~
Kodokuna Haisha
2603245 I'd say having "chapters" with as little as two words is more than "a little trouble". If you worked on your scene transitions, what you'd have here is worth one, maybe two chapters.
2604595
Dear Jphyper,
I've purposely structured the Celestia chapter to be like that.
Also, I wanted the chapters to be short. I know I can go into immense detail, but it wouldn't fit as to what I was aiming to. Usually, when someone talks inside their head, it's short and not as descriptive as a novel would be.
Thanks again~
Kodokuna Haisha
2604764 That may work while talking to yourself in real life, but it doesn't work when telling a story to others.
2604880
Dear Jphyper,
I'll take your tip to heart. I'll try to restructure the story as best as I can.
Cheers~
Kodokuna Haisha
Awww! :(
Lol I thought the wolf was DR. Wolf the brony reviewer! Xd
'Most easiest' isn't proper grammer, but then again it's pinkie pie! :P
Awww...dang! Here comes appealing pony Spike! Xd
Nice comic book allusion! :)
? What's the point of this chapter? Is Tia answering Chrysi? :/ What's going on?!
Oh no...Rarity's gonna die! :'(
I can't wait for the rest of the story! :')
