Checkpoint life is both dull and interesting. While the process is repetitive, the ponies going through the checkpoint vary very differently. It is also interesting to be in a newly-formed kingdom.
A "Papers, Please" parody.
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I need to read this!
edit: and I wasn't disappointed
I love Papers, Please. This is like the third crossover I've read. We need more of them or better yet, a full pony conversion on of the game.
I loved every bit of it. Tiny details stuffed everywhere.
GLORY TO ARSTOTZ-
umm
GLORY TO TWISTOTZKA
I quite liked this. Granted, Twilight's rules to enter Twistoska are far stricter than the ones in the game, but that did have a point, so I'm okay with it.
It's perfectly boring, yet entertaining! 
I could only find a bit of similarity between Jorji and Pinkie. They both would always be cheery.
Anyway..... GLORY TO TWISTOTZKA!
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3182582 Yeah The first day of the game is always strict like this one.
damn you bet me to it
too bad twilight will learn the hard way about it because guess what someone going to start rebellion to it and that of a like.
anyway this is a good cross over i do say so myself
But sadly you bet me to it bammer
3181616 yup that was i was thinking too maybe i make the cross over about it where twilight fucked up big time and she laern it the hard way
GLORY TO TWISTOZKA!
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Papers, please.
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Twistozkans only.
By the way...this is unique crossover. Simple yet "nice to read". Sadly there's few mishaps in your story. Overall...8/10
How dare you to detain Fluttershy!?