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julianhoene


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Nice title.
Not so nice story.

Diggin the blog post in the sidebar about how you have a talent for finding and correcting mistakes in stories when this story has so many mistakes in it.

Like seriously, learn punctuation rules and practise them.

e: also this doesn't appear to be a crossover, delete that tag.

Hmm why are there so many dislikes? I think its pretty good so far. :pinkiehappy:

2588472 your talking about me having mistakes in my story yet you cant even spell practice right

BTW i used word to write this so i just went to all the lines it showed and pressed the first thing it said

also how is it not a crossover when the guy goes from earth to equestria

also not to mention my brother was rushing me to get out a story so this is what i came up with if you want me to fix my mistakes in this chapter ask and i will do so but from there on please stop hating

2588472 2588463 if you would like me to rewrite the chapter i wil;l happily do so just next time i just wish my brother doesnt rush me

2588488

your talking about me having mistakes in my story yet you cant even spell practice right

Ahem.

Practise
(transitive, UK, Canada, Australia, New Zealand, Ireland) To perform or observe in a habitual fashion.

BTW i used word to write this so i just went to all the lines it showed and pressed the first thing it said

For reals? Word is stupid. It certainly is useful but don't rely on it all the time.

also how is it not a crossover when the guy goes from earth to equestria

Would you believe this is the second time I've had to quote from the tags FAQ today?

Crossover: A crossover story is when two different 'worlds' (read: sources) collide. If you mix MLP with any other cartoon, book, anime, show, radio program or whatever... it is a crossover. This includes 'amalgamations' of worlds, such as Fallout and MLP.

2588488 It can be spelled both ways.

Also, this isn't a crossover. Best remove that tag.

2588511 ok but understand the reason for this poorly wrote and done fic is because my brother was rushing me to get out a fanfiction

2588497
Hate? Muah?
Nonsense! I complimented your title, and I simply threw in my opinion in the most non-hate way possible!

2588522 i will just give me a sec i was rushed

2588529 i agree but if you want me to rewrite just say so

Hey keep up the good work it does have some mistakes but the story line is good needs more too.

crossover is now removed

2588536 like i said i will i was rushed

2588545 You can't rush a good story it turns bad. :pinkiehappy:

2588557 i know i wouldnt have rushed it if it werent for my brother well anyway GTG bye i will hopefully fix everything and lengthen up the story tomorrow

So you do like clop.....:trixieshiftright:

2588533
If you were rushed...
Then why didn't you just put this off until a later time?

2588587 because my brother made me get it out the second i finished

2588587>>2588557>>2588522>>2588511 well i updated mistakes i made tell me if there is something i still need to change and i will do so

2593250 sorry it takes me a while to write

2593261No biggy take your time.

Nice story so far, a little choppy but ill definatly look for updates:derpytongue2:

i'm really liking the way this was written, it is very interesting!

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