Azure Wind was the best thief in Canterlot, and found himself recruited into the Secret Guard, an ancient order loyal to the princesses and tasked with protecting Equestria, by any means necessary. His typical solitary nature is changed upon entry to the Guard, and he becomes closer to those who befriend him. With the increasing danger of each mission, including deniable operations outside of Equestria's borders, he must learn to trust those around him as much as he trusts his own skill.
Chapters (17)
Cool!
This story definitely needs more love. Maybe you could put it in some groups or something. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Have a moustache.
Good story. I wouldn't mind seeing a romance tag though.
He's overconfident but seems to have reason for that. Also, he is overpowered in some regards and has little to no equals in the guard. He has a cliche back story. I'd also like to see more interaction with the Elements, as it stands there really isn't enough reason to add their tags.
2874214 If it helps answer your concerns, we're about to see a bunch of different stuff happen (climax of the story and all). Thanks for the input, I'll be sure to pay more attention to that in the upcoming chapters.
Midnight's right your character is way too perfect and your storyline is a little weak. It's a good read don't get me wrong but it could use a little work
italics didnt close properly in chapter one
3067719 Fixed, thanks!