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Darrtaa 27125

Joined February 2012
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    Darrtaa's Stories (2)

    • Lyra's Pyro Predicament
      Lyra finally meets a real human! But he's not what she had expected; Team Fortress 2's RED Pyro...

      63,029 words · 10,564 views · 575 likes · 16 dislikes
    • Twilight's Demoman Devastation
      (A follow-up to Lyra's Pyro Predicament) Demoman and Spy battle the forces of evil in Equestria.
      59,517 words · 3,733 views · 374 likes · 14 dislikes

    Part 1: Lyra's Pyro Predicament

    Part 2: Twilight's Demoman Devastation

    Part 3: King Sombra's Robotic Retaliation (Coming soon)

    When a mishap causes two para-dimensional weapons to colide with one another, RED Team's Pyro is sent flying from the Team Fortress 2 universe into the alternate universe of My Little Pony, where he is almost instantly discovered by Lyra, who shelters him in her home.

    Having him hidden in her small townhouse isn't easy; keeping him from setting things on fire, teaching him that not every cart that passes by is cause for alarm, and that blue ponies are not something to be suspicious of.

    However, with Nightmare Night soon approaching, Princess Luna feels that there may be something more sinister riding on the coat tails of Pyro's grand entrance; the first human to ever set foot in Equestria some thousand years ago...

    First Published
    11th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    23rd Jun 2012

    Comments ( 788 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Nice story!:pinkiehappy:

    Tracking!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :derpyderp1:>>207993 Alright, thanks!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Actually, this seems pretty good! Will wait to see at least the next chapter!

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Cool fic! Let's see where this goes!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiecrazy:........ awesome..... :yay:~♪yay♪

    :moustache: Keep up the Epic work my good sir.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    It was good, but you lose some points for grammar.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You know that girly clapping pose the Pyro does after he high-fives someone? That sums up the way I feel about this story.

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    tracking for sure, looks great so far.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    You commited to the tf2 in this one. Thank you, most just give a "and then tf2 met ponies." Keep it up.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>208318 Thank you good sir!

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    tracking

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>208395 Yes master

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh my god I read the first paragraph of the engineer and I almost fell out of my chair laughing at the situation that I can imagine perfectly in my minds eye (I was that same engie). Haven't finished but I will say now that this has to be good.:pinkiehappy:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    *Sees title and picture*

    Grordbort/TF2/MLP? :raritystarry:

    *Error: All wants have been depleted. Please want more later*

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>208504 I was right! Tracking!:twilightsmile:

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    WAHOOO!!!! MORE!

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Yet another fic for me to wait countless hours impatiently for

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    OH GOD, i belive the ponies finally found out about tf2's vs. saxton hale mode:twilightangry2:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Lyra? Pyro?!

    BUCK YES I'm in!

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    ...wait, the pyro did not have he's manmelter equipted, he shouldn't have been able to use the hakouden taunt, in fact, he should have been in civilian mode, seeing as he had no weapon equipted, IT DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE :rainbowhuh:

    DF
    #24 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Interesting... Tracking.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #26 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Pyro: MEDIC!

    Medic: Ya?

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Huddah Huh!  (Faving this!):pinkiehappy:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #29 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    favorited and starred and all that shit that happens when you get a good writer with a good idea.

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>208805:twilightoops: Yikes, I'd better keep working on that next installment then! Also, nice catch on the "No weapon, no taunt" thing, but I'm operating under the assumption that he can use the Huddha-oken without the aid of weapons (I personally think he can use that anytime he wants, but incase you haven't noticed, he's a tad looney) because his ability to summons flames WILL INDEED help him out later.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This story is pretty damn good I like how you mixed game with story, and I guess the pyro brought his inventory with him :rainbowlaugh:,

    I cant wait for the next chapter keep up the great work :pinkiehappy:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    brilliantly made keep it up:eeyup:

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    i enjoyed

    keep it coming

    that is all

    kthanxbai

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This is actually Pretty Awesome! I hope to see more of this, sir! :pinkiehappy:

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    WANT. So... so much WANT. :pinkiehappy:

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    mmmmm, Pyro, as in the good or the bad Pyro?

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    FRIKKEN TRAKED BY DESCIPTION ALONE. story was good too. no regrets!::rainbowkiss::rainbowdetermined2::twilightsheepish::moustache::twistnerd::scootangel::twilightblush::raritystarry:

    take these happy pony emoticons

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>209382 Awesome! *adds to stockpile*

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good indeed!

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    #41 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>209045 :trollestia: I see you noticed that the Pyro always comes prepared, good catch :moustache:

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    The team fortress 2 part was fucking awesome very few people can write good TF2 fanfiction but you sir manage to pull it off. can't wait to see where the story takes my second favorite class in the world of ponies.

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Nice intro. Keep it up.

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    YES! :pinkiegasp:

    YES! :yay:

    Another pony / TF2 crossover fanfiction!

    I have to say, i wanted to track it when i saw the title, but the my eyes looked at the first chapter, and i just read it all, not even stopping on the way.

    I'm such an TF2-verse and fanfiction addict. :twilightsheepish:

    Congrats on achieving eternal fame! Fics of this quality last long trough the time. :yay:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was awesome and we'll actually get to find out what the Pyro looks like without the mask. One of life's mysteries solved. I wasn't sure about this fic then I saw it's popularity and read it and I'm like...SOLD!  

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Good work dear sir! take a 5star and i will track this shit!

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Interesting, but it needs clean-up. Grammar's off in some places, and apostrophes are misused in others.

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Very interesting. I'm going to track this and come back later.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This story has some real POTENTIAL. M O A R !!!

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>209949 :derpytongue2: Yeah, that's not really my strong suit  

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>210110 Dunno if you have an editor, but they can be a godsend sometimes.

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>210124 :facehoof: Yeah I don't have one...I was just happy that everything was spelled correctly (to the extent that it was)

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    This was an interesting read, can't wait to see where you go with this! :pinkiehappy:

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>208805 Is that your answer to everything?

    I do say, this is actually pretty damn good. I've got my eye on you...

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    If grammar's not one of your strengths, get someone you trust to go over stuff to clean up before publishing a chapter.  It'll really improve the quality of the story.

    (ninjaedit:)

    >>210132

    Yes, definitely get a pre-reader.  The fate of the world hangs in the balance, man!

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    My pitiful attempts at TF2/MLP crossover pale in comparison to the raw awesomeness contained in this fic...:rainbowkiss:

    I hereby nominate you as the ruler of the universe! Also, I believe I've misplaced 6 of my stars... If you find them, keep them.

    SO... MUCH... WIN... :raritystarry:

    #57 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    "And worse of all; the Scout's ideas on where he thinks the Dispenser should be."

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Woah! Litisen hear, hoss. Make more of these things and you get a medal! :rainbowlaugh:

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    HAH.

    #60 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Ha. Unforseen consequences.

    i see what you did there, dude. :rainbowlaugh:

    ...

    traking device has been attached to your vessel.

    MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA:pinkiecrazy:

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice story. Tracking.:derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

    #62 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    was i the only one who watched meet the pyro on youtube?

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    TRACKING THE SHIT OUT OF THIS FIC!!!!

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I forget when exactly, but I was thinking, "Everyone does ponies in TF2. What if it happened the other way around?"

    We shall see.

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Very compelling story. I will be tracking this. I saw a lot of mistakes in word choice, though. For example: "Barely," not "barley." Those are tough because spell-checker won't catch them.

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>211506 :twilightangry2::raritydespair::flutterrage::applecry::facehoof: Tell me about it...

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This has potential. 5 and track

    #68 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    FUCK YES

    Cheers

    ~iraqlobstah

    #69 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    meh, it caught my attention. tracking... waiting... waiting... BORED... :flutterrage:RAAAAAAAAAAAA-

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I SPY with my little eye,

    A tracked story!

    Can you find it?:raritywink:

    -PwnyBrony:duck:

    #71 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Tracked !

    Now I wonder, will we discover pyro's gender ?

    *w*


    Also, damn you, I should be working, and now I just launched TF2

    And now I think about it, is there a tf2-FimFiction steamgroup, as equestria daily and ponyville ?

    #72 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Mmm... Pony Fortress 2 Big Mac=Heavy AJ=Soldier RD=Scout Fluttershy=Medic Spike=Pyro cant think of more

    #73 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>212280 No its: AJ= Engineer Spike= Soldier Pinkie= Pyro Twilight= Sniper Rarity= Spy Big Mac= Heavy RD= Scout and Fluttershy= Medic

    #74 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>212797 and Zecora= Demoman

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>212798 I always had it as:

    Applejack = Engineer

    Twilight Sparkle = Sniper

    Rarity = Spy

    Fluttershy = Medic

    Rainbow Dash = Scout (since she's a rainbow she makes herself cry)

    Pinkie Pie = Pyro

    Big Mac = Heavy

    Derpy = Demoman

    Royal Guard = Soldier (or maybe the upcoming guy Iron Will)

    #76 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    five track fave

    #77 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>212933

    I think you can argue 'bout Derpy. Her eyes make her fit in as a soldier (I'm talking about his helmet).

    Demo rather fits Zecora or Berry Punch. But what do we have two teams for?

    #78 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    while i agree that fluttershy fits in to be medic, her personality couldn't be any more opposite of him (except maybe in flutterrage mode)

    #79 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Incredible story! Alot better than I expected. I will track this, as I realy want to see what happens next

    -Mortem aut gloria. Eligere sapienter.

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>213161 :moustache: I say, the "two team conundrum" indeed allows anybody to place whosoever they wish within the 18 classes, I chose Derpy because the fact that she's awesome, and Team Fortress made a drunk scottish cyclops be their explosives expert probably wasn't the best decision of all time. But Berry Punch...:twilightoops: wow, didn't even cross my mind when I wrote that comment...  

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>208805 :derpyderp2: Question: How do you get pictures/GIFS on here? Is it just a link or....?

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>213910

    There's a button that says 'Insert image'

    If you cant find an image's url, use google chrome, search for a good image on google, then right click the image and hit 'Copy image url':twistnerd:

    As for the characters fitting in with the classes, I think that 3 of the m6 would be on RED, and the other 3 would be on BLU. The other 12 ponies would be filled in with the various OC's that people have been debating about:coolphoto:

    Just my opinion:moustache:

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>213910 img tags. They're handy little things.

    Also, this is a most enjoyable story so far. Especially because, unlike most Human in Equestria scenarios, the Pyro is one of those rare magic-using humans.

    I suppose the biggest question here is twofold: What is the Pyro under his/her/its suit, and will anypony realize that it is a suit and not just what humans look like?

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    For those of you who might not be as versed in TF2 as others. This is what Pyro is supposed to look like

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The Pyro is a girl... the same girl that does the announcing. Valve confirmed this.

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>214526 :unsuresweetie: That was Machinima.com's version, I admit it was pretty well animated, but the guy who does his voice in game is the same guy who plays the Spy.

    #87 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>214983

    No No... that was just a example, Valve has hinted many times that the Pyro has like a 85.999 chance of being a girl. Yet they don't want to confirm it.

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215154 Mostly because mystery goes hand-in-hand with everybody's favorite pyromaniac. Who knows if Pyro is a guy or a girl, hell, maybe it's an IT. One way or another, we may never know (but for my story...well, you'll find out:scootangel:)

    #89 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>210210>>213910 gifs is the same as pics, just post the link, also, YES, THIS IS MY ANSWER TO EVERYTHING :flutterrage:

    #90 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215181 DAMMIT, I cant seem to find another tf2/pony crossover in all the fanfiction world, if only...

    hey, would you object to other people doing some tf2/pony crossovers?

    #91 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    No lie, I am now tempted to do my own TF2 crossover. It is done all the time with Garys Mod on Youtube, but i haven't seen anything written.

    #92 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215680 :scootangel: Of course not! I'm certainly not the first, nor do I wish to be the last. I'll gladly lend a hoof with plot development and character design if you want.

    Oh, and this is what I first read that kinda got me on this path http://www.fimfiction.net/story/63/My-Little-Fortress%3A-Teamwork-Is-Magic-

    #93 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Phmmmph mmmph phmmph mmpphmm!

    ^That means 'This story is awesome and I'm tracking it!' in Pyro-speak.

    #95 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    As a Pyro player I approve of this fic......How long until the Pyro wants to set someone's mane on fire?

    #96 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215985

    everyone says: update has arrived?

    #97 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>216273

    Actually yeah that sounds funny.

    #98 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215680 There's a really good one over on FF.net. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7360739/1/Waking_Nightmares if you want to check it out.

    To the author: I dunno if you should have gone into such detail on the weapons. Otherwise, you did a good job keeping as true to the game as possible.

    #99 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Is it just me, or are the fics getting more spread out and more weird? Lol

    #100 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>215181

    Mpph mpphaha mppph FWOOSH! (This story has been tracked because it lights my fire. So now I'm lighting yours with five burning stars.)

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