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Caroline lives a bleak and lonely life; she wants friends, but her past mistakes prevent her from doing so. One night, Caroline makes a wish she never thought to come true; to be somewhere she could be happy. Then, Caroline suddenly wakes up in Equestria, and meets the Pies, a family who needs happiness more than her. In this story, Caroline will make an unbelievable bond... One that destroys the fourth wall itself.
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Interesting story so far, can't wait to see how this story plays out in the future.
so she was granny pie
MOAR
i don't normally like human goes to Equestria stories but this is great!!
2582910 awesome sauce
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Thanks~!
What in the sweet name of Celestia is- OH SWEET CELESTIA THESE ARE DELICIOUS!
How I imagine what their reactions should of been.
What was it...
I love this. This is awesome.
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Thank you~!
3860923 I love this. I can somewhat relate. Not suicide repeated, but I understand what becoming a brony/pegasister feels like.
when is she going back to the realm of technicolor equines?
Man. I hope no one I know or meet ever goes to the mental hospital or ward that she went to. Declaring a full recovery after crying and dancing? That ain't right.
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First story I ever wrote on this site. Not my best work, but I keep it as a reminder of to better myself whenever I need to.
"Last Modified
21st May 2013" y-you will continue right? RIGHT? Plz?
Sequel please!! Let her meet the pies again!!
All of my
's
SHE NEEDS TO MEET THE PIES AGING PLS!
am going to go cry now bye
good story
Brb, bawling tears of oh my gods that was amazing.
The story stood well before this, but now? Very, very nice ending. Sad enough to make it emotional but not laying it on too thick. I like the description of the kids. Even if they aren't players in the story, seeing how well she knows her grandkids says a lot about her. The one complaint I have is that Seth was the dad -- the only positive trait you gave him was that he was the first to see what she was trying to be.
Still, very good. 9.5/10.
this has the potential for agreat story but my main issue is this, you cannot put a story like this in paragraph form with different people talking in thesame bloc of text. seperate speach and responce to different lines. such as:
"So, I never caught your name." he said, trying to steer the conversation away from the akwardness.
"My name is Caroline" I said, sending him a greatful look.
He raised his eyebrows. "Caroline? Tharts an uncommon name from around here."
see where im going with that, its easier to read and tell whos speaking and talking towards. Also, try limiting the number of sentenses to 2-3 per line to avoid the blocs of text. Other than that you sentance structure is fine and i didnt see any spelling errors.
so all in all, kepp up the good work
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This was my first story on the site and I haven't exactly gotten around to polishing it up. I'll get to it, eventually.
Praying to xenos rulers? HERESY! *BLAM!*
Lovely intro chapter.
So this is a modified origins of pinkie story?.... Neat
And the secret to Equestria's utopian existence is revealed! Rock farmers!!!
buck I haven't cry'd that hard in a long time
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And a single hyperactive human who trained the Pink One.
4190677
Actually it is, because her issue was a LACK of expression, not an overabundance. She finally let out all the feelings that she kept in, and so was 'cured' in a way.
No no no. I'm not ceying! These aren't tears from crying! I just got attacked by that damn ninja with the onions again...
OH WHO AM I KIDDING! I CAN'T STOP CRYING!
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Yeah, but both are a problem, especially since going from not emoting to over-emoting is totally a thing that exists.
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Eh. Fair point.
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Ak!!! The feels!!!!
God, so much text.
I almost lost motivation I got from description. Seriously, that's a lot of boring, sad intro.
God, this's painful.
...
Beautifully written and a beautiful story.