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AngelShy24


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An earth pony mare with a mysterious dark power is bent on ridding the world of all joy and happiness and then cover it in total sadness and sorrow. But in order to do so, she needs to find and seek out the Element of Laughter... Pinkie Pie!
What are the reasons behind this mare's ruthless actions; and can one little filly be able to change the darkness in her heart?

(This original story was inspired from an episode of the cartoon "Courage: the Cowardly Dog" called 'The Tower of Zalost'.)

(WARNING): Prologue is a bit depressing; not for the faint of heart

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 11 )

This looks amazing. I wouldn't be surprised if it got featured.

I LOVED that episode of 'Courage the Cowardly Dog' as a kid.
2566141 This is SOOOO going to be featured.

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Thanks, it's actually my all time faviorite episode of the show.
This idea was in my head since late last year, and now I'm bringing it out ; hope it turns out well.:pinkiehappy:

Extremely powerful. Magnificent :pinkiehappy:

interesting premise, and making Dinky the main character, very original, I look forward to seeing where this goes, keep up the good work :derpytongue2:

Idk, it might just be me, but I think youve been using "Trinket" a lot.

Anyway, good work so far! Can't wait for the next chapter.

The Tower of Dr. Zalost.
Zalost means mourning in another country

You REALLY messed this chapter up. So many mistakes. No offence there, but you really should have an editor or two and a few pre-readers. I can do one of those jobs, if you want.

Also, its probably a good idea to use italics instead of quotation marks for thoughts.

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sorry I took long to respond, but I read over my last chapter and can see what you meant.:rainbowderp: if you can help edit the chapter, just let me know and tell me what to do; this whole editing other's stories is still kinda new to me.:twistnerd:

3387275 Sure, I can help. Ill message you a message of what I could do, because I don't want to clog your story with a whole bunch of comments about editing. :derpytongue2:

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