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A platoon of Royal Equestrian Army soldiers returns from a distant mission. Hailed as heroes, the success of Gale Storm and his troops has inspired ponies all across the nation, including Rainbow Dash. In a time when disaster after disaster has eroded confidence in Equestria, with unrest on the rise, Rainbow wonders whether the time is now to enlist, and begin her journey on the road to being a Wonderbolt. Her friends have their doubts, however. With the way things are going in Equestria, a soldier's job is nowhere near as safe as it used to be. As Rainbow grapples with her decision, Twilight Sparkle finds herself drawn, as a representative of the Princess, into the shifting alliances and rivalries of the Equestrian political system. Given a mandate to try and encourage change, and reform among the backwards court of nobles, she meets more obstacles than she had prepared for. All the while, in the shadows, a new kind of enemy lurks, one which nopony in Equestria is truly prepared for...

First Published
10th May 2013
Last Modified
11th Jul 2013
#1 · 76w, 6d ago · · · To be a Hero ·

This story has no tags whatsoever >.>

#2 · 76w, 6d ago · · · To be a Hero ·

>>2558602 My bad, It was posted in a rush, fixing now.

#3 · 76w, 6d ago · · · To be a Hero ·

It shows promise... Favorited

#4 · 76w, 6d ago · · · To be a Hero ·

I hope that tragedy tag is there because there's going to be an actual tragic character, and not because someone is going to die or be crippled (which is entirely incorrect usage of the tag).

#5 · 62w, 5d ago · · · Battle Scars ·

Good story so far but hardly a thing about Rainbows joining.

#6 · 62w, 4d ago · · · Battle Scars ·

really good story, you write like a professional (maybe you are). I love all your stories!:pinkiehappy:

Please keep on writing!

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