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evenfall369

Joined February 2012
69 followers

I'm a guy who writes amateur fanfiction about colorful ponies. It sucks. I'm constantly rewriting things because I know they suck, and I try to make them not suck. I'm thirteen; give me a break.

Stories (3)


AlChestBreach and his motley, do-or-die crew conquered the Wasteland, and now, they're in Equestria to conquer friendship itself. Join them on an epic quest to do what they've never done before: not use their weaponry to slaughter everything in sight.

Well, maybe not most things...

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First Published
10th May 2013
Last Modified
10th May 2013

Comments ( 47 )

#1 · 68w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

Hey, guess what I do instead of work with my old stories?

I resurrect dead ones. I'm a scumbag like that.

So, yeah! Return of the Brown Bear himself! Get 'er done!

#2 · 68w, 15h ago · · ·

SO let me get this straight its a group composed of the Human AL, the Protectron Ballarms, the former Brain bot Janet, the zombie (or ghoul) Jerry, the radroach Steve and the Deathclaw Mister Cuddlesworth.

Correct or did i forget anything?

#3 · 68w, 15h ago · · ·

>>2556702 Nope. Dream team all there.

#4 · 68w, 14h ago · · ·

DAYUM!

#5 · 68w, 14h ago · · ·

Steve all the way!

#6 · 68w, 14h ago · · ·

I think you captured Al and his companions perfectly, I was laughing for most of the chapter, i'll be awaiting more.

#7 · 68w, 13h ago · · ·

>>2556789

Steve is best Radroach. He should get a story to himself.

#8 · 68w, 13h ago · · ·

"Hey, what happened to that, anyway?"

"You lost it."

Stupid thing teleported me to Primm and dissappeared, even the mod author says that this cannot be fixed. Fuck it.:facehoof:

#9 · 68w, 12h ago · · ·

>>2556941

Someone needs to write that story.

#10 · 68w, 12h ago · · ·

I have no idea what I just read.

#11 · 68w, 11h ago · · ·

*rubs eyes in disbelief*

Well it was bound to happen. And I'm glad

#12 · 68w, 11h ago · · ·

Have Cuddles rip apart a Manticore and have Fluttershy witness it, that'd be funny.

#13 · 68w, 9h ago · · ·

i give this all the fucks and all the wins i can muster

#14 · 68w, 8h ago · · ·

''I did the only thing i could, I freaked the fuck out!  not like normal freaking the fuck out, this was like, omg there's 18 spiders in my shoes and the have BOMBS strapped to them!'' - AlChestBreach

''o-ho-ho bullet to the skull you say?'' best line ever:rainbowlaugh:

#16 · 68w, 8h ago · · ·

Jesus christ, this is literally impossible to not read. First one to link the breacher of chests this wins.

#17 · 68w, 7h ago · · ·

my god i LOVE AL

#19 · 68w, 6h ago · · ·

>>2554310 needs more chumpkins

#20 · 68w, 6h ago · · ·

Oh my god I never thought I would see this.

Mr. Cuddlesworth is best pony.

Keep this going, you hussy!

#21 · 68w, 1h ago · · ·

MOAR DAMNIT.

I DEMAND MOAR.

YOU STUPID BASTARD.

#22 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·

"Did someone slip Niner's drugs in my Nuka Cola?"

#23 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·

One regret about this story.

It wont let me hit the like button more than once.

#24 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·

finally someone made a fic about Alchestbreach

#25 · 67w, 6d ago · · 1 ·

is alchestbreach still human or became a pony?

because it is cool if he became a pony

#26 · 67w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

someone should send Al this

#27 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·

>>2562125 I'd rather not. I'd personally hate it if people started shoving their fics in my face. Especially from a fandom that has a less-than-reputable reputation.

#28 · 67w, 6d ago · · ·

I said microwave...

#29 · 67w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

I was waiting for this.

It was inevitable. (Like war, it never changes.)

Maybe the code will help somehow? (IT ALWAYS DOES!!)

...Wait.

WHO DISLIKED THIS?!

YOU WILL LIKE THIS RIGHT NOW!!

OR WE WILL FIND YOU!!

DON'T MAKE ME GET SLENDY'S BROTHER!!!!

#30 · 67w, 5d ago · 4 · ·

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! I MUST READ THIS!!:raritydespair:

#31 · 67w, 5d ago · 5 · ·

>>2564029b I WILL PERSONALLY HUNT DOWN WHOEVER DISLIKED THIS DOWN AND SMACK THEM WITH A FISH!!! :twilightangry2:

#32 · 67w, 5d ago · · ·

:pinkiecrazy:  I find this amazing, and well kept to what I imagine his personality to be like:pinkiehappy:

#33 · 67w, 3d ago · · ·

Will you add things like console commands or something like that?:derpytongue2:

#34 · 65w, 5d ago · 8 · ·

You should have legion assassins come in like they always do everytime Al does a walkthrough on a mod lol

#35 · 60w, 4d ago · 7 · ·

You Sir need to continue this. NOW:flutterrage:

#36 · 55w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

still alive?

#37 · 54w, 5d ago · 10 · ·

WHY WERE WE NOT TOLD OF THIS STORY'S EXISTANCE?!?

#38 · 54w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

When the hell is the new chapter man?

#39 · 48w, 3h ago · 3 · ·

Where is the next chapter?

#40 · 45w, 4d ago · 3 · ·

Update. Blog give us something to show that you're not dead.

Comment posted by Razorblade11234 deleted at 10:43pm on the 18th of December, 2013
#42 · 30w, 2h ago · 3 · ·

this story is dead and that's a bad thing

#43 · 24w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

Awww...no more Chapters?  :fluttercry:

#45 · 19w, 6d ago · 6 · ·

>>4090579 this is how the world works.

horrible fanfic: millions of chapters.

decent fanfic: some chapters.

awesome fanfic: one chapter

#46 · 19w, 6d ago · · ·

>>4223017 You speak many wise words sir.

#47 · 10w, 3h ago · · ·

is this guy even working on a new chapter??

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