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Tofazz

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Stories (17)

  • I Wish I Was
    After a fight with her mother; Dinky finds an old diary from when she was little.

    1,738 words · 1,167 views · 90 likes · 0 dislikes
  • A Faded Touch of Blue
    Moxie's whole life has been decided for her. Except for that one trip to Canterlot, that one step into the wrong establishment, and that one mare.
    13,990 words · 3,343 views · 294 likes · 8 dislikes
  • A Love Like No Other
    Follow the thoughts of Ditzy regarding her childhood.
    1,857 words · 981 views · 55 likes · 0 dislikes
  • An Audience of One
    When a life is coming to an end, it is for those left behind to tell the rest of the world how that pony’s life was. How will Octavia remember the most important mare in her life?
    3,357 words · 361 views · 37 likes · 0 dislikes
  • The Love I Left Behind
    3,673 words · 1,121 views · 70 likes · 2 dislikes
  • I Wish You Could
    5,926 words · 486 views · 33 likes · 0 dislikes
  • A Dream of Flight
    6,052 words · 1,118 views · 59 likes · 2 dislikes
  • Till Forgotten
    2,721 words · 605 views · 38 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Coming Home
    3,396 words · 154 views · 23 likes · 0 dislikes
  • What We Search For
    4,447 words · 395 views · 22 likes · 0 dislikes

Blog Posts (53)


Blood is thicker than water.

It's a phrase Caramel has heard since he was a little foal and has lived by.

His life has been turned around and put on hold due to accidents within the family.

Standing by what he has learned his whole life, he has arrived at a breaking point.

How exactly do you tell your family that you have nothing more to give them?

How can one possibly tell them that they're relying too much on one pony?

How exactly can you tell them that you can't take care of them anymore?

Thanks to Spu313 and Arbarano for helping me with grammar and Aridifolia and Enix as pre-readers.

Music made for this story: http://youtu.be/ZUTFmid9k-A

First Published
10th May 2013
Last Modified
10th May 2013

Comments ( 7 )

#1 · 63w, 2d ago · · ·

Well hello there, Kim.

Comment posted by SpyketheRAWRCat deleted at 11:22pm on the 10th of May, 2013
#3 · 63w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

here, dis ish for Caramel

p.s., forget the cussing part. i hate that part, too

#4 · 63w, 2d ago · · ·

Caramel is thicker than blood.

#5 · 63w, 1d ago · 3 · ·

I  loved this story  <3

#6 · 62w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

Finally I read it. :yay:

Well to be honest the writing is less polished than it is in other stories of yours, maybe your editors weren't nit-picking enough (no offense to them), there are some grammar mistakes and sometimes the descriptions are a little longer than necessary in my opinion, but the content truly makes up for it. :pinkiesad2:

Again, I'm really really sorry for you and your family, if your mother and your brother were here with me now I think I would hug them (and I'd give a hug to you as well of course :fluttershysad:).

You definitely talked about your emotions through Caramel in a convincing way, I especially liked the parts were first he thinks the most honest answer and then says something different, pretty clever. And I think you told me this had the purpose of making you feel empty... well, you succeeded. Life is so ruthless and no one is special to its eyes, when life kicks us in the teeth sometimes the only solution is learning to bear it.

Have a good day, and thanks for another good story :heart:

#7 · 59w, 9h ago · 1 · ·

Added to Twilight's Library by contributor recommendation.

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