First Lieutenant John "Aquila" Killinger was on a less than routine patrol flight, when he was somehow teleported to a different planet. Little does he know, he is the last hope for the inhabitants of this strange world.
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its too short! Dx
But I enoyed it regardless...
Nicely done... nicely done.
6413643 Yeah, I wish I had something longer, but the next chapter isn't ready yet and I wanted to put something out since you guys are amazing and put up with my shenanigans
6413804 Yay for shenanigans yay:
Eet's Ah-live!~
One Question: is it canon?
6415609 By canon, are you asking if this chapter is actually a legitimate part of the story and not some offshoot? If so, then yes, it is.
I don't want to give too much away, so let's just say that I'm playing around with the POV
6415707 Sorry if that hurt my feelings? Bro, that was a bloody fantastic rant, and I appreciate the honesty and the fact that you took the time to sit and write that.
Sure, not everyone will like this story, and I will admit that the beginning is a bit "hurdur", as you put it, but this IS my first story, and (I'm pretty sure) the writing does get better later on. I might go back and do some fixing at some point, but that's a very big maybe.
However, I would appreciate it if you would refrain from calling my readers "Simpletons" because they like my story. You can throw all the shit you want at me, but do NOT bring them into it.
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Speaking as one of the "simpletons," not every story can be Arrow 18. The are moments that are funny, some that are emotional, some that make no lick of sense, and some that are all three.
This is volunteer writing. The authors get no payment. The benefit of the story it's not "this will make me famous" but rather "someone will enjoy themselves".
Anyway, your opinion is appreciated, but be civil about it.
This isn't the greatest story I've ever read either, but I still find it enjoyable.
6424445 See, now I have to read Arrow 18 to see what you're talking about. Judging by the amount of likes, I'm guessing people like it.
You should definitely use google drive, so problems like that don't happen. I've been reading your fic, so far I find it enjoyable. Please keep up the good work.
6486458 Yeah, I think I just might. Had to wipe it again on thursday
6642327 Whoops
Wonder how that one made it so long without being spotted. Fixed.
Currently addicted, awaiting moar!
Seriously though, really liking it so far.
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Yeah, I've caught a fair bit of flak for that bit. I think it's in need of a rewrite to make it a bit more believable.
The wait is real ;-;
6730477 Yeah, sorry about that
Life's just handed me a plate full of shit lately and I haven't had much time to write. I've got finals on Wednesday, so after that, things should clear up a bit. Hopefully.
6732310 Understandable. Ive been going through a ton of family problems. Sometimes life just hands you a plate of shit and expects you to eat it before anything else. Take your time.
Yo, is this story still alive?
7381947 yes. It is alive.