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You Don't Care

Celestia and the other ponies are grown up in this, and Flutershy's children get to learn about how a monster can turn into a hero, a hero whom sacrificed himself for love.
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Noble Wings

Noble Wings #1 · May 10th, 2013 · · · Annoying People ·

Keep going BUT LET THEM FIND OUT

Berxerxes

Berxerxes #2 · Jun 24th, 2013 · · · Annoying People ·

Where does Discord play into all of this? You've done a marvelous job pulling the reader in, even if it was a little confused at times. But don't stop, I wanna see more.

As for your writing, you're decent. You're not the best one out there, but you're competent.

And you certainly don't suck, let me tell you that.

P.S. Remember to make Discord funny, he is a character that should be played for laughs.

Draxco