Follow the Mane 6 in just a typical day in Ponyville, where even the small things are what make life interesting.
Coming soon: Fluttershy's day.
Don't mind me, I'll just sit here, quietly writing bad stories. And songs. And stories with songs.
Follow the Mane 6 in just a typical day in Ponyville, where even the small things are what make life interesting.
Coming soon: Fluttershy's day.
This Applejack one was great - Pinkie Pie was kind of meh.
I've a lot of time for jokes about Rarity's dramatic nature, so this was great.
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Yeah, I wasn't entirely happy with Pinkie myself. I shall try and improve. I could do with some interesting premise so I have something to work with.
Is this form of story allowed on here? I'm not trying to be negative I just am curious...AS A CAT. Meow~
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"It passed legal."
-Lauren Faust
I thought is was very interesting! A little long, but I liked it! Don't say you think it's not hat good, think that it is good!
Keeps out the good work!
-RainbowDash3000
Gak?
I know this is incredibly vague but for my favorite pony , do something cute.
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Probably not. Is Gak edible? Wouldn't know.
It's a reference to something else.
lol
ouch..
Do you think it would work better in narrative format rather than a timetable? I found it to be hard to plough though the chapter because it felt very stop start.
I found this one much more...pleasent(?) to read in comparison to the last chapter. I think the key is how much writing is in each timeslot. In Pinkie's day each entry had at least 2-3 lines which was probably a little much (at least for me). This one had an average of 1-2 lines which made it more succinct and gave it more flow.
These just keep getting better and better