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cannedcream


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Canter Barry, a budding author of modern fiction, was ready to pen his first novel, but found himself suffering from terrible writer's block that's lasted for months.

Striking a deal, his body now plays host to something alien, and in exchange he is given the inspiration for his greatest work. But, while his mind is free, he has lost control of his body, and the story he is being forced to write is turning darker than anything he's written before, and worst yet: the events are starting to come true.

His only hope for salvation now comes from the arrival of the strange pony calling himself the Doctor whose somehow entered his script.

Time is short, and end is coming. The story must be finished.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Really good story! :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile: I think you're pretty decently talented at this. You did have a few spelling mistakes, though... shall I point them out here or by PM?

Very nice story like how you even managed to manipulate deus ex machina in a way few doctor who shows have done.

2536583 PM would work best so I can make those changes without future readers knowing of my failed proofreading skills.

...Unless they read this... DARN IT!

2540880 :rainbowlaugh: OK, then--PM it is. :rainbowlaugh:

I haven't finished reading yet, I don't thing I'm even a quarter of the way there, but I would like to say that I love the name of the writer within the story, Canter Barry. That right there is pure genius.:raritystarry:

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