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Princess Celestia’s 5000th birthday is fast approaching. The Mane Six and Luna decide to work together and throw a party for her, with many surprises that neither she nor they will ever forget.

A big thank you goes to Conicer, who made the wonderful cover art for me!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 113 )

I don't know why this story has a rating of only 2, it's actually pretty good and it's interesting to find out a possible bit of Equestrian (or at least Princess Celestia's) history.

Seems fun! tracking:twilightsheepish:

think I'll track this as well. imagine Tia freaking out at her big 5-0-0-0. nice use of Lu's archacic equestrian, too.

Celly's only 5000? I thought she'd be at least 6 digits. All the same, I definately want to see how this plays out.

Good job so far, I'm interested in what angle you're taking the rest of the story. Is Twilight going to have to keep the surprise secret from Celestia? Looking forward to the next!

Five stars and tracking. Keep it up.

Captured Pinkie PERFECTLY!

Lol I love it! :P

Thank you everybody for your kind words :twilightsmile: It really means a lot to me and I'm glad you enjoy it. If anypony has any questions or notices any mistakes I've made feel free to ask me. Thank you again. :twilightsmile:

I would say the chapters are a little short, but if you update even half as often as you have so far it will be more than an impressive amount of work. I am liking this quite a bit so far.

Brony of FunnyJunk reporting in.
Just read chapter 5 and I must say that this is very well written.
I cannot wait for the next one. :pinkiehappy:

I really like this, but it just ends at such a... :derpytongue2:
Can't wait for next one:pinkiehappy:

good chapter. the only thing wrong is you described derpy as blue and not grey.

Sounds like a truely spectacular suprise they arranged. :twilightsmile:

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Thank ya, :twilightsmile: it took a while to write this bit to tell the truth.

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Thanks! :twilightsmile: I wanted it to be something no one would expect, I didn't even expect the integration of the Rainboom until I was writing it out :rainbowlaugh: So I guess it was a surprise for everypony! Even the author. :twilightsmile:

Lots of stories use an eclipse, and I think it fits just nicely with yours :twilightsheepish:

Tis always nice to see stories that give Twilight at least one hobby/extracaricular activity not present in the show. :twilightsmile:

And somepony create that image a desktop wallpaper resolution now. :flutterrage:

D'awwwww moment with Twilight :rainbowkiss:.

Great chapter, I look forward to reading more.

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I agree, this must become a real image.

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If I could create art, believe me, I would do it.

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Thanks! Although there's only two chapters left now :fluttershysad:
Until I have an idea on what to write next of course :yay:

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Hopefully someday an artist will read this story and be inspired. :raritystarry:

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That would be wonderful :pinkiehappy:

I knew Twilight would totally go the extra mile with her gift :rainbowlaugh:

Zap Apple Cider!?

Did anypony else instantly think of Powerthirst when they read that?

Luna sitting on a dolphin. I see what you did there :twilightsmile: That picture is cute, and its funny to imagine Luna sitting on a dolphin statue in the middle of the royal garden. :pinkiehappy:

:yay: Luna got to show off her night.

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Aha! I was hoping somepony would notice :pinkiehappy:
Here, have a muffin as a reward, no Derpy, no! :pinkiegasp:

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251422 Great chapter, and that image warms my heart :). Warms it with Muffiny goodness.

I'm glad I tacked this. It was a nice little read, nothing too grand or amazing, but that's what made it really good. Looking forward to seeing some more of your work :raritywink:

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Thank you! :twilightsmile:
That's what I was going for to be honest, so I'm very glad you like it for what it is :pinkiehappy:

That was brilliant, I really enjoyed this story :heart:

Now, of course, one must think: When's Luna's birthday?

lovely, nice, and leaves you feeling good. Extremely enjoyable read!

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I'm very glad you liked it! :yay:

Very nice story with a great ending. Thumbs up (no more 5 stars bah)

This was very nice. Please write more stories.

verry well written.... i think u should submit this to EQD it should pass through there filters with ease...:twilightsmile:

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Thanks! I'll get round to it when I have some ideas don't worry :twilightsmile:

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A friend is currently proof reading it and stuff, once she's done that, I'll submit it :twilightsmile:

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i think it doesnt need any proof reading...... but it doesnt hurt to have some one go over it again ..... some times my eyes miss things :twilightblush:

251422 WHY DERPY HAVE NO WINGS?? :rainbowhuh:

Cool pic though :pinkiehappy:

Make one about Luna's birthday!! :pinkiegasp:

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I would but it'd kinda be the same thing just substituting the name Celestia with Luna. I wanna mix it up in the next thing I write, probably some AppleDash or something :rainbowderp::ajsmug:

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