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Draconis187


I am a simple writer who gets bouts of writer's block and procrastination. But, I do enjoy writing and wish to get cover images of my stories.

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Wow i log in just in time to found it. Awesome. but i don't get how the Shadowbolts manage so arrived to the Frozen North (that remind me to Warcraft ... i really need to stop playing WoW, is screwing my mind:pinkiecrazy:) i though the were a Nightmare Moon ilussion?

prepare for a big ol storm of chaos:pinkiecrazy:

2532879 Hey, Vector, did you watch the movie Digimon X-Evolution? If you did, I managed to figure out something that answers multiple questions that the movie probably made you ask, so if you've seen it, send me a PM! Or, if you can't wait to find out what I realized that answers so many questions, check out the thread I just started in the group Digimon and Ponies, and prepare to have your mind blown clear out of the water!

2534268 well I haven't watch it I actually prefered the original Digimon, it was one of the animes that marked my childhood. But don't worry I will watch it went I buy a new charger for my laptop because the last one got screw some cables... Long story short. I'm writting this with my phone actually since the laptop is death. (I had all my trolling games there!!!)

2534400 Well, I posted a theory that answers multiple questions that the movie makes you ask. You can find it on the group Digimon and Ponies.

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Typo alert! Even though this is a brand new story, the same rules still apply.

One the whole, Winter Wrap Up was going to be finished with plenty of time to spare thanks to everypony not arguing for once and the fact that Equestria was no longer in crisis was also a plus.

Remove the bold letter for the sentence to make sense.

They also revealed where the locations to them all are to the Princesses as a gesture of goodwill between the two races.”

To his defence, he was busy trying to stay alive when he first met them so I doubt he had time to examine their habits,” Fluttershy interjected.

Should be In his defense, not to his defense.

Rule 1: Do not do any move or attack that could greatly hurt the other.

Use would be a better word to use.

Other then that, it all looks good. Stand by for my thoughts about the chapter.

So we start off with a little slice of life to help give us some idea of what has happened between the last part and this part, including Fluttershy's recovery from being something that thankfully isn't quite a Shell-Shocked Veteran, but someone who has needed to adjust to not always needing to watch her back anymore, because she is no longer in hell

So after a completely successful Winter Wrap Up, they left the big party to hold their own private party, which makes sense when you consider that they're the ones who fought and risked dying in order to allow this peace to happen. And after the party, they decided to have a bit of practice, because they can never tell when they might have to face more enemies who can't be reasoned with, and they want to be prepared by keeping their skills sharp. After all, it's better to have something and not need it then to need something and not have it, with the something being experience, in this case. And it makes sense that they wouldn't let Nyx practice with them, considering that she is just a filly right now.

However, Soarin' is under the impression that the Changelings need to be punished simply because he was left Locked Out of the Loop, which, combined with his Face Heel Turn, means that he is without a doubt going to be a Knight of Cerebus. And he has become an Alicorn because he found King Sombra's horn, but something tells me that it did not attach itself to his forehead by itself, which means someone else caused it to become a horn that he can use to use magic the same way unicorns and alicorns can. Of course, having the ability doesn't mean much when you haven't had much experience yet, and are going to be going up against opponents who have literally had years to practice and learn many spells, while it's doubtful he knows many spells himself.

Given the fact that in the description, you urge readers to read Past Sin, I assume Nyx is an Ascended Extra since the last story, which makes me feel extremely happy that she is actually going to play a massive role in the plot itself, because let's face it, not having her be included in Dohavshy May Cry probably wouldn't have changed too much of the plot, if any! Of course, the question still remains, how is she going to get a Plot-Relevant Age-Up?

Here, prepare to be badged!

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Can't wait for the next chapter!

2536460 All shall be explained soon. From the Shadowbolts to Nyx becoming the lightning wielding swordspony.

2536489 By the way, how much do you know about the Digimon franchise?

2534400 Actually, you don't need to bother downloading it, because you can find it for free on Youtube! Here you go!

2536491 I've seen a bit of it and I have one of the old playstation one games of it. That video, isn't that Omnimon? That big blue gold and white one?

2536542 It's actually the movie X-Evolution. All CGI, no humans, and the plot might seem confusing at first, like you walked into a theater that was already in the middle of playing it, but I give you my word, it's an excellent movie, showing how a Dorumon, who is constantly hated for bearing the X-Antibody, becomes the most powerful of the Royal Knights, the Aloof Hermit, the Lord of the Empty Seat, the Alpha Digimon Alphamon, who only ever appears when the Digital World is facing extreme peril. It's worth noting that except for this movie, he has only appeared in video games and the manga Digimon Chronicle and D-Cyber, which means that in six seasons of Digimon, he has only briefly appeared during one of the openings for the fifth season. In other words, the Digital World needs to be in even greater peril then it was in all six seasons for him to appear.

By the way, the summary says to expect many crossovers. Will one of them be with Okami?

2564509 It will only be games\shows that I know of. And I don't know Okami.

Just found this, and I'm curious, gonna add Nerevarine, course he'd have to be an Elf, preferably a Dunmer, in order for him to be any logical addition.

2575999 Well, we'll see what happens. I have three stories to update before this one.

2576108 And this is why I failed, make ONE story, stick to it, then move onto another when it's done. Keep the inspiration to a singular story, then let the mind blowing ideas flow, but keep the ones that don't fit for other fic ideas. Also, I am the master of procrastination: Trying to write a new fic? Re-watch an entire Youtube series.:twilightblush:

2576217 :rainbowlaugh: I just play games. But yeah, I procrastinate as well.

2576233 Yeahahaha, not like this. I've been stuck on the letter A for three months.

Typo alert!

“But why is it here?” Spike asked as the gem glowed faintly, making I’m take a cautious step back.

Should be him, not I'm.

Other then that, great chapter! Stand by for my thoughts on it!

So while facing the king of the demon world is something Fluttershy can do with a grin on her face, she's still deathly afraid of disappointing her friends. Sounds just like her, to be honest!

And Past Sins Twilight is practicing the magic blade spell that Dohavshy May Cry Twilight learned from Vergil? Sounds like she plans to pay the other world a visit...

And the experiments that both Twilight Sparkles are working on For Science seem to be how they'll be able to manage that!

And it's nice to see that Rarity enjoys the occasional prank, as she demonstrated by giving Joystick that experimental hangover remedy!:rainbowlaugh:

And we've got some troublemakers, including a lime green pegasus who is a dead ringer for Joystick, complete with his own Blue Rose!

In other words...I'll let Dante sum up my opinion of this chapter!

Well, badge time!

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Can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully, we won't have to wait as long as we did for this chapter!:pinkiehappy:

2632965 Well I hope not to take too long on it. Too bad you didn't not my hints of the identities of the five ponies. I doubt you will figure out what I have in store for the group.

2632976 Well, it's more fun that way! It means I won't see the plot twists before they happen!

But it seems to me the pegasus Joystick encountered might be either a long-lost twin brother of his, or a copy of him that was created with magic. That's my theory, anyway.

2632986 If you fired that gun, you would have been so far off you would've hit the next dimension!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: So wrong! This will make the reveal even more fantastic to me!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Gosh, shit just got real!! That's why i like to be with Rarity, she can be like GLaDOS, charming and intelligent but EVIL!!!.and you know, I actually enjoyed the fashion festival ... Wow I was more drunk than what I though. And she is going to be so piss went she gets back, and I'm the closest thing that looks like a punching bag D:>
2632986 dude I would have know if Joystick had a long lost brother. So far it has a sister since my sister became a pegasister not to long ago. I don't know who the other ponies are too but I really want to see go it goes and know more about my "Evil twin"

2635260 Don't worry it's not some evil twin but something entirely different. It was just Friend of Bronies' imagination.

2636161 well, they said they were changelings but let's see how it goes

Typo alert!

Twilight turned to Trixie, “Sorry Trixie. I have Nyx staying over for a few days so I you can’t use the spare room.”

Remove the bold word. It makes it difficult to understand the sentence and has absolutely no bearing on the context.

Luna nuzzled her older sibling with a small smile on her face, “You are still their Princess, Tia. They know you will always look out for them and you always try her hardest to achieve peace.”

Should be your hardest, not her hardest.

Other then that, not a bad chapter! Stand by for my thoughts on it!

Whoa, Soarin is showing shades of being Dangerously Genre Savvy by not being willing to wait for his Plan to be executed, but at the same time, he's also showing some Genre Blindness by thinking that the Princesses are nothing without the Elements. Then again, With Great Power Comes Great Insanity.

And something tells me that Fluttershy, at the very least, will not be caught as off-guard as the others, especially since you emphasized in chapter one how hard it was for her to let her guard down completely after the last story!

Trixie sat down at the table and began sifting through the various bills, fan mail and the odd approval for a restraining order.

I spy, with my little eye, Bread, Eggs, Milk, Squick!

And a female pegasus named Surprise? I spy, with my little eye, a Mythology Gag! Of course, you subverted it to a certain extent by having her be yellow instead of white, but still...

And Blaze and Silver seem to be the Red Oni, Blue Oni members of the Quirky Miniboss Squad, except they partially subvert it by both being the Red Oni!

Here, shut up and take my badges!

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2644078 Well, if you go back to Dovahshy May Cry. You'll see a little something concerning them all. Well, The Pegasi, not Soarin.

Yes dude, you were right, I got suprised. The fallen wonderbolts are the bad guys!! I was like: how the hell didn't I see that comming?
Also I just discovered that dresses are very confy but it still not my style, I prefer hoodies!!
And speaking about the teams. It's a very hard choice. You can eather choose to pair them with the ones how they interact more, or with the ones they interact less so they can have a better relationship. Each one has their good and bad things!

2645173 I shall reveal how the baddies came to be in an interlude. Not sure when I'll do it though or I might not even do it as an interlude. We'll see. It's almost crossover time!

2645919 And when the Elements of Harmony are scattered, Soarin is probably going to encounter unexpected resistance from Dante, Vergil, and Baral...

2645919 Tell me, any chance one of the crossovers might be with Blazblue? Because I can think of one character from there who would be the ultimate ally. But instead of doing him an injustice by attempting to introduce him to you, I'll let him introduce himself to you!

"I am the White Void. I am the Cold Steel. I am the Just Sword. With blade in hand shall I reap the sins of this world, and cleanse it in the fires of destruction! I am Hakumen! Your end has come!"

Let's face it, you know he's overpowered to a ridiculous extent when he goes up against Hazama and Relius Clover, two of the most evil and powerful characters in the game, at the same time, and Hakumen wins, even though he's only at 15% of his power!

Lets go in order 1st pinkie in mass effect next is deuce X after that I have no idea.

2697230 Well... I have no idea where Fluttershy is. Joystick and Rarity are in Soul Calibur I think. Twilight and Nyx have arrived in the world of Black Cat. Trixie and Applejack are in... Diablo?

i guess i'm not playing since you already told me the crossovers but anyway ... great chapter, i really want to know what happened with Gilda and Dash after that!!

Okay, so if the others are correct, Pinkie Pie is in the world of Mass Effect, with a male Shepard. Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash and Gilda are in Deus X, and they and Adam just died, but they'll respawn. Joystick and Rarity are in Soul Calibur. Twilight and Nyx are in Black Cat. Trixie and Applejack are in Diablo. And Fluttershy is in the world of Megas XLR, which I'm kind of surprised no one else managed to figure out. And as usual, Idiot Hero Coop has accused the Monster of the Week of Arson, Murder, and Jaywalking!

Badge time!

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2697789 Yup, you're 6 for 6 there. I loved Black Cat and when I thought about doing these crossovers, Pinkie in MAss Effect stuck out like a sore thumb alongside Black Cat and Soulcalibur with Siegfried.
2697739 If you know Deux Ex... I doubt I need to explain.

2697812 I'm just surprised no one else figured out Fluttershy was trapped in the world of Megas XLR. I mean, how many other giant robots that use a car as their cockpit like that are there?

2697812 OH! so they respawn! how didn't i think about it:ajsleepy:?

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