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Futurama Crossover. When the intrepid crew of Planet Express discovers a portal to another world in Old New York, they meet the ponies from Equestria. Curious about Earth, Twilight Sparkle and her friends are sent on a mission to spread the message of friendship and harmony throughout the universe, much to the dismay of the universe.
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Two of some of my favorite shows combined, awesome! 
Dear Barrobroadcaster.
Wait what?! But the three of you spent the night there, how can you possibley say that? Ok calm down , maybe this is taking place before that episode and we're still in season-
You may want to make "kinds a" into just "kindsa".
I would suggest putting a bigger space between the branch here.
Come on man, mix it up a little it's the year 3013, why just Mass Effect 3, why not Mass Effect 33? But that's just my thought on the matter.
I would suggest taking out the "really".
Nothing wrong with this, it just made me laugh my butt off
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Is the Professor still talking? Because if so then I really don't see why you would need a break between the three sentences.
Again bigger spacing. And I believe "backin" is meant to be "back in".
This seems more like something Pinkie Pie would do rather then Flutershy
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Anyways, I can honestly say, despite it's flaws, you have a great story on your hands and I hope to see more.
Yours Truly, The Cake Devil.
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Did we perhaps mean Fluttershy's animal sanctuary? Visiting there would make sense for school kids.