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That ending.... I just.... Nooooooo.
Other than that... That kid needs to write.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Word, that ending. Kaidan, you have a talent for surprises, you know that?
Good show. Bad ending.
Fart porn is a turn off...
Bravo to the novice, I enjoyed this.
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At least she didn't shit on him.
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funny how I just took a dump on the bed and now this...
four bean and cheese burritos hahahahaha
Nice work anon
Sssshhhhhh... ;)
Oh? you take donations? ...
this was great regardless of the ONE fart at the end. cloppable ... yes
Not much into the ending and the change in writing styles through me off. You should write a Octavia one that wasn't donated though
I wrote this.
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I'll take those as compliments.
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I'll take these as constructive criticism.
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This scares me.
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Somebody wanted me to, and then I thought of my sanity.
Firsy he, then I, then you, dood, stop changing perspectives so much!
but at least it was Octavia!
having 2 first person roles was a bit hard to follow but other then that it was a good read. not my fetish but who the buck cares lol.
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I don't know if the authors note was serious about you being fourteen, or if it was a joke (hard to tell with Kaidan some times) but aren't there age barriers on Fimfiction?
Ah, who gives a flying f*@k anyway?
A couple of tense issues. Nothing major bad with this. I am surprised that you didn't allow Octavia to have a coprophagy scene XD
8 1/2 out of 10 If I had to rate. Brohoof /)
2677209 This was actually amazing. If you actually are 14, then more respect to you, for that and sharing your fart fetish. This was an enjoyable chapter.
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If I remember correctly it was the day after my birthday. I couldn't sleep and I got a dare from a friend to write scat porn. Chapter = Product
I mostly just came back to snicker at how badly written this is and shall remain (though I could definitely make it better). I don't even clop xD
2677209 I don't know who you are but you are awsome
octavia should of created ths with him
oh...did i just read the last part...holy hell
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I see what you did there. Nice... a bit odd, but nice
Was it 'he', 'I', or 'you'? Seemed to change throughout the chapter
not bad