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Bluecatcinema's Stories (20)

Adjustments
Twilight Sparkle needs to adjust to her being a princess... and so does Ponyville.
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Finn
A spell gives Spike the chance to acheive his deepest desire.
3,449 words · 976 views · 33 likes · 0 dislikes
A Canterlot Birth
Princess Cadance and Shining Armor are about to hear the clip-clip of tiny little hooves...
1,673 words · 2,249 views · 41 likes · 1 dislikes
Double Date
Love is in the air... and one young pegasus gets caught in the tailwind.
1,643 words · 522 views · 22 likes · 1 dislikes
Cutie Mark Crusaders: The Next Generation
11,531 words · 465 views · 19 likes · 1 dislikes
A Canterlot Anniversary
1,272 words · 1,208 views · 20 likes · 3 dislikes
Mare of Honor
2,635 words · 434 views · 8 likes · 0 dislikes
Rainbeau
3,088 words · 550 views · 23 likes · 4 dislikes
Cutie Mark Crusaders: Manehattan Chapter
2,778 words · 229 views · 11 likes · 1 dislikes
World Without A Rainbow
1,877 words · 329 views · 7 likes · 0 dislikes

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Finn by Bluecatcinema

Romance Comedy

After one of Twilight's spells turns Spike into a handsome unicorn, the baby dragon decides to use the opportunity to woo Rarity.

Twenty-Four Hours · 8th Feb 2012

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Time's Up · 8th Feb 2012

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Making Things Right · 8th Feb 2012

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Rainbowdash99

#1 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 6d ago ·

Sounds.. Interesting! :pinkiehappy:

Ponydora Prancypants

#2 · Chapter 3 · 66w, 6d ago ·

My favorite line;

:moustache: "You're so beautiful and kind."

:raritywink: "Yes I am."

Nice. :duck:

Rainbowdash99

#3 · Chapter 3 · 66w, 6d ago ·

Wonderful! :duck:

Simply divine! :raritystarry:

Deep Pond

#4 · Chapter 3 · 66w, 6d ago ·

That was quite good . . . short, effective, and everyone was in-character. Always enjoy a bit of Spikity :moustache: :duck:

Two small critiques:

:twistnerd: You've centered the text instead of left-justifying it. This makes it a little harder to read, for me anyway.

:twistnerd: "I never said that." Declared Twilight, "Declared" should not be capitalized, since it's part of the same sentence. You also use periods at the end of a character's dialogue where there should be a comma.

Dakln

#5 · Chapter 3 · 66w, 5d ago ·

It's a bit rushed, to be honest. You shoulda spent more time on it to flesh it out.

RaggaR82

#6 · Chapter 3 · 23w, 3d ago ·

Mate...

Don't want to confuse you or anything but... You know that Finn is a person that lives in Finland

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