Big Macintosh is depressed over his past, Rainbow Dash has a crush on an unknown stallion, Fluttershy misinterprets a hug as romance, Rarity is stressed by her friends' issues, Pinkie Pie has stolen a mind reading device from Twilight for her own schemes, and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are trying to resolve a relationship that was never broken. Can the town of Ponyville take the stress of so many secrets?
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oooooooooooooh the plot gets even thicker... i think
I'll be honest; I don't know why this doesn't have more likes. The pacing is a bit rushed, sure, but this story certainly has my attention. Have a like and a fave, you"ve earned them, my friend.
Thanks for all the support guys. I've taken various feedback into consideration and have been working on chapter 4 for about a week (I edited the first 3 for around a month prior to submission). It should be up by next Sunday at the latest, but expect a Friday update.
2550022 Thanks for the compliment. The reason for the pacing was that this was intended to be a three-chapter fic, but my intended plot had to be changed to make more sense, so the current chapters were edited to provide exposition and that sort of messed with the flow. I'll work on better pacing in the fourth chapter.
“Every time we try and do something nice, it always turns out real bad,”
So true,so very true...
This story is awesome waiting for update