Scyth is a red earth pony from Fillydelphia
He had come to Ponyville,because his mother wanted a better life for him.
Applebloom meets him and develops a liking to this colt, he is very kind to her.
Can she tell him about her feelings or will Diamond Tiara get to him first?
(Collab with brony laughsatme)
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If anyone wishes to make Fanart of Scythe for this story, would be excellent. PM me or brony laughsatme on this site, saying you can do so.
Thanks,
From: brony laughsatme and Gnome
Chapters (6)
No offense, but you need a better proofreader......
Fillydelphia...
Decent start I guess... No offense, but I would make sure to have more than 1 person proofread your story and the time lines really confusing. Is there a jump between the second and third chapters or is it all in the same week? But this has a lot of potential and I really hope you do good! Also, it's Fillydelphia not Philidelphia( But IDK you might have meant Philidelphia).
2715722 Thanks for that ... I will work on it
2717926 But is there a timeline jump?
2718233 Yes.. Like I said, I will work on it. Thanks for letting me know
2718356 Could you possibly explain it to me? You don't have to if you don't want to but I'm just curious as to how long it is.
2719239 All the chapters and events ... happen about in a couple weeks or one week. Ask the fellow writer of this to make sure. his screen name is brony laughsatme
Umm.... there was some mistakes spotted. In chapter one or two, you said hand instead of hoof. And in the same events, you said everybody instead of everypony.
But its good though!
2739650 Thank you.
We are working on all mistakes made.
Oh shit! Who is it?!?! Cutie Mark Crusaders? Mom? Applejack?!?! We will find out soon. (I hope.)
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Lol idk he still has to write it out...
Did I make a good cliff hanger?
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Lol I actually think he's mad great strides.
i bet its AJ and she will be pissed
Great story so far, Pinkie aproves
Keep up the good worK!
3316264 Thanks. It's really appreciated.
Hey, when are we gonna do another chapter?
I want to write more.
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Yeah, I think we both do. Lirex is far better at writing then I am, so the even numbered chapters are my doing.
I am ready to type a fanfic called Soarin's Surprise. I was hoping i could email you and you could help me type parts of the story.
This is really good
too bad you haven't updated in like 6 months 
I'm going to be here waiting for a new chapter 
PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I'm going crazy
and I need more!!!!
Omg dat cliff hanger, so far so good, hope you update soon
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Probably the worst time to ask, but will you ever continue this story?
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Dead now