Well, that was quick. One year writing it, and in the end it took 5 days to do a complete edit of it. For the most part what was changed was just to standardize the chapters, minor things like how an onomatopoeia was written out. Now, what changed that is of note:
Chapter 14 had a small rewrite in the flashback.
Chapter 14.5 was edited and had some text cut for clarity. The text in question amounted to pillow talk between scenes you cannot even see without going to the unedited chapters.
Chapters 14.5 and interlude five have had the links to their respective Red Chapters removed.
Those of you who have read and enjoyed the Red Chapters may want to favorite that fic. Any future chapters uploaded will not have a direct link in Green as before.
I have no intent to further change the content of Green. If this finalized version is still judged too mature for them then I will appeal citing numerous other fics which they have approved which are if anything more suggestive. If that is still rejected, at least I have the satisfaction of knowing its not due to the grammar.
And now, the fun part, waiting.