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MainAnypony having trouble with writer's block, making your story flow, or even just looking for some proofreading? Toss your ideas around here and we'll see if we can help you get back on track, or just let us know any other way that we can help you!
It's been a while since I posted the thread about adding stories, and we have some new members added since then (rock on), so I'm going to post those rules here.
If you add a story, you are not adding it to advertise it. If that is the case, it will promptly be removed. Any stories that are added here need to be added for the sake of getting assistance with them. That said, if you add a story to the group, make sure you add a thread titled after your story (i.e. If your story is titled Family Mares, name the thread Family Mares). In that thread, explain what you want help with and we'll do everything we can to help you out. If you do not know how to create this thread, please send a message to primalcorn1 and I will help you out.
If you have any further questions regarding this group, feel free to contact either Dash Is Best Pony or primalcorn1.
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Hello everybody,
Spike the Knight.
It is an action adventure story with Spike as the main character.
I am looking for feedback, creative criticism, general tips and any sort of advice anyone is willing to give.
If you wish to help leave a comment or send me a PM.
Hope you enjoy.
I have this one shot which I think can become awesome, but I think that it should be reviewed first. Does any body have the time to review?
hello if anyone can give me a hand im writing a story right now on MSO any one willing to give me a proof read and possible fixes that i get from rambling? PM if you do thanks
can anypony help me with my story The Four Trials in Canterlot?
Trying to polish this to make it less laborious to read.
One is Silver
(Human)
>>293431 If you like your OC and want to keep with it, you shouldn't hear the others. And your stories are good, I like it :
New in group, I need some proofreaders for my story. Several posts about it being sloppy in grammar. Thing is: English is not my mother tongue and I might oversee some issues. So a proofread might be of great assistance.
Help me to punch out these grammar issues.
i added a story to fimfiction and someone told me my OC was terrible. Should i change it?
Hi Hi! I needed some proof-reading on my story and I'd like somepony to help.
Title: The Trials of Queendom: The Gems of Eternal Peace
Genre: Romance, Adventure, Slice of Life, Tragedy
Need help with: Grammar errors, a.k.a proof-reading.
I hope I get some help and thankies for making this group!
>>286941
I'll try it out if you'd like some help editing (I'm fairly good at that, at least). XD
Well... I'm new to FIMfiction, so I just posted a single part of a story and am wondering whether it's worthy of reading or even continuing.
If you're interested in helping out in the process, I would be most grateful!
After reading that, I fell kind of welcome. You ponies seem really friendly.
Well I am simply here for some proof reading and for some advice wherever or not to carry on with my story or to put in straight after proof reading. All though if I do carry on with it I do have some idea where I want to go.
Title: Eternal Darkness
Genre: Sad, Adventure
Area of Assistance Needed: To keep writing or not. Proofreading and editing. Advice on wherever or not to enter it.
Hope you reply back soon.
Sincerely, Sparkle Writer
Keep Moving Forward
I need to write a new story...... Every moment of every night, ideas are freely bouncing around in my head. As soon as I think I've got a good one, I go to write it and then I can't remember or I don't know how to start it and I'm staring at a blank screen for fifteen minutes. Help please?
I'm aiming for something dark/tragic. Like a kidnapping and torturing. Or possibly a serial-killer.
And if that fails, then I might decide to make a story about a Great Pony War.
Thanks.
Hewwo! :3
The much-hated disease that is Writer's Block seems to have gotten me to me again. I am stuck on a single scene in a rough draft of a one-shot (or one-shot multi-chapter story) that I am making involving four of the Mane 6 in a wuvable dialogue scene. Any volunteers?
My writer's block amuses me.
I have the character, I know what has to happen/will happen
and I have the epilogue but I just have no idea how to start writing the darn thing ;-;
I love writing fics myself but...
I'm having trouble with two stories of mine. Light and Dark, and Memories of Sorrow. Both follow the back story of a world that I made up called Selonia and how it helped shape Equestria. You see the amount of characters I make has just made it really hard to concentrait on the stories. I need help implementing these things into the fics
Arch-Angels (Humans capible of both flight and magic)
Furlings (Cat like creatures with strong magic)
The Fallen (fallen angels)
Deamonta (evil spirits that feed off of suffering)
Macha (Creatures of shadow that feed off memories and emotion to become whole again)
The forgotten (those that were attacked by the Macha)
Humes (Basicly humans that can fight the Macha without loosing their very soul to them, they have double the speed and double the strenght.)
As you can see I have a lot of ideas but I can't seem to put them in my stories properly.
Can someone please help.
>>283704
Start with the end instead?
I'm in that moment when you start writing a story, you have so much planned for the later part, but you're stuck in the beginning. Anyone got an idea on how to want to write the beginning?
>>283383
Try making a basic outline & see where each path leads?
Ha, everything every pony says here reflects me a lot. Maybe that's why I have a few uncompleted stories. Guess, this is the right place for me then. I know my beginning & end. It's the middle that elude me the most of times.