Feel like finding a more fun way to soak up in the sun other than going to your nearest lake or swimming hole? Well then, look no further than The Pond! That’s right! The Pond! Equestria’s newest, funnest, and wettest waterpark, ever!
Catch some surf in the first ever mare-made wave machine. Take in the beautiful scenery as you float down our peaceful lazy river. Then you can slide down the scariest, most intense, most awesome water slides you have ever been on!
So what are you waiting for? Come on down to The Pond, where everypony can take a dip!
Short description of story: A sunny day out at Equestria's first water park!
Characters Involved: Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Fluttershy, Lyra, Vinyl Scratch (DJ PON-3).
Longest story I've ever written. I know for a fact there are some errors hidden in there, so I'm looking for any pre-readers to help spot and fix them. Ways to make the story flow better (or to make Pinkie even more silly) would be greatly appreciated. I'll message the Google Docs link to any who volunteer.
Thanks a bunch, and enjoy!
3rd Apr 2012
8th Apr 2012