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Allonso Bronyguy 030373

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    When bad things happen, we get past them and move on. But what if the thing that happens is really bad?

    Money Shot tells the tale of the time a terrible tragedy befell his marefriend, Lily, and how she overcame a great loss.

    A special story written for Hearts and Hooves Day.

    Featured on EQD Mar. 23, 2013

    First Published
    13th Feb 2013
    Last Modified
    13th Feb 2013
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    A retelling of 'The Gift of the Magi' by O Henry.

    A story of two lovers who want nothing more than to give each other the perfect Hearth's Warming gift.

    Just a little something that I did as a special treat for Hearth's Warming.

    Cover Art by me.

    Dramatic reading by The Living Library

    First Published
    23rd Dec 2012
    Last Modified
    29th Apr 2013
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    Neon Lights moves to Ponyville and runs into his old friend, Vinyl. As they spend more time together, he develops feelings for her. In the meantime, he also runs into somepony else whose intentions are less than good.

    This story on a temporary haitus until I finish Soarin' with Apples. The time between updates caused by doing both stories was far too long for my standards. I apologize for any inconvenience.

    Special thanks to PluckyNinja for letting me use the cover image. Go check out his stuff on deviantart. He also does a really good blog on Tumblr called ask sexy spitfire.

    MLP is property of Hasbro.

    Any music I put links to is the property of its respective owners.

    First Published
    22nd May 2012
    Last Modified
    13th Feb 2013
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    New cover image commissioned from rainbowfaux

    While spending the day at a fair in Ponyville, Soarin' is injured and stays at the farm for a while.  He develops feelings for AJ, but can't act on them. When unexpected circumstances turn AJ's world upside down, will Soarin' stay to help her through? Will he ever be able to tell her he loves her?

    Please comment and critique.

    My little pony is property of Hasbro.

    First Published
    12th May 2012
    Last Modified
    8th Apr 2013
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    Ten years ago Spike left Ponyville out of fear of his rampages hurting somepony. Now he has returned and must face up to the events surrounding his departure.

    Needs work, but I am not quite sure how to make it better. Please comment and critique.

    Disclaimers:

    MLP is the property of Hasbro

    Cover image made by GreyAcumane on Ponibooru

    First Published
    3rd Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    9th May 2012

    Saw the bit with these two in the episode and I almost broke my face from sqeeing. I've always shipped Snails and Twist, but I think this pair is pretty cute too. Feel free to rate, comment, the usual jazz.

    I submitted this to Equestria Daily, but it didn't get accepted and I could use some help making it better. Here are some things they suggested that I could use help fixing. Please comment.

    1. From their reply: "Chowder himself comes across as earnest in his desire to tell Twist about his crush, but other than that we learn almost nothing about him. You have a marvelous opportunity in front of you to be one of the first authors to develop a personality for this character. In leaving him relatively blank you leave the reader wondering why they are interested in following along with him on his journey to write the card. Why not explore farther why he has a crush on Twist? Why not let us know a little more about his background? How does having an uncle who works in a fancy restaurant affect him? You mentioned his love of/ability to identify cheeses...why not expand on that and make Chowder a more sympathetic character?"

    2. Twist's lisp being overdone

    3. Horte Cuisine's accent needing some tightening

    Thank you in advance for any help you can give me

    First Published
    14th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    30th Apr 2012

    This is a story about Colton Vines and Daisy as well as some of the other background characters.

    Disclaimers:

    I do not own MLP or any of these characters. They are the property of Hasbro.

    Please rate, comment, and criticize constructively and be specific. This is not only my first fanfic, but my first ever work of literature that isn't a poem, so please be honest as a member of the Apple family.

    I tend not to use characters from the show, so most of the characters I use, I can't tag. (Kinda lame right?) anyway, I'll add a couple more once I write them in.

    Got the picture from ponibooru. The title says the artist is John Joseco.

    First Published
    4th Jan 2012
    Last Modified
    3rd May 2012