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peak 0090

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    The story starts with a young sergeant, hoping to mend a rocky start on her career, and bring peace to the galaxy.

    Somewhere else, the Jedi have their own problems, and sends out a team in the hope of saving one of their own.

    But their fates will soon intertwine, as they uncover a plot that might very well end everything they holds dear.

    AN: any critique is welcome, i can't improve if noone will tell me what i am doing wrong :)

    and, for the sake of the story, the ponies are bipedal here. makes the interraction with equiptment and weapons simpler

    First Published
    24th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    7th Aug 2012