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Parakalo 021

Joined October 2011
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    "The Cards That Bind Us" is a story that is essentially the "bag and tag" of all of the germs for stories that I've had mashed together in an intricate romance-adventure involving extra-planar creatures, the origins of magic in Equestria, and the limits of the pony (human?) psyche.

    Rated Teen for violence, minor gore, sexual themes, use of alcohol, and a bleak image.

    The coverart and all the illustrations are done by my brother DigitDaemon and his bud blastmast. I am eternally grateful to them for all of their help, and everything looks beautiful and fantastic. I'm sure I'll be paying through the nose for it later, but it was absolutely worth it.

    Editing done by my closest friend Glade. His insight is one of my most valuable assets, and the read as a whole would be nowhere as pleasurable as it is without him.

    A spiritual successor to "A Comet's Tale". You don't need to read "A Comet's Tale" to understand what's going on in "The Cards That Bind Us". (Actually, please don't. The only semblance is some minor plot elements, one of the characters, and the protagonist of "A Comet's Tale" will make a minor cameo. I'm not proud of "A Comet's Tale". Don't read it.)

    Including one of the few things I liked about "A Comet's Tale" was unavoidable, and this, in a way, is me redeeming myself for that whole experience.

    Any feedback is always appreciated. What you liked, what you didn't like, etcetera. If you have a suggestion for where you think the plot is going or should go, go ahead and drop me a line with your thoughts.

    First Published
    4th Mar 2013
    Last Modified
    6th Mar 2013

    "The Lost Room" tells the story of Detective Joe and his experiences after being thrust into the odd events transpiring around an odd motel room in Gallup, New Mexico. This is my take on it, so naturally it's gonna have ponies in it.

    For those of you who don't know what "The Lost Room" is, or are too lazy to look into it, allow me to offer you this.

    It is similar to "Death Note", but its about more than books. And there's less killing. Less, at least.

    You don't need to have watched or know what "The Lost Room" is to enjoy the story or my writing, but you may understand more coming into it if you did a little homework. Knowing is, as they say, half the battle.

    One last bit of advice: Be careful. You are treading on territory beyond pony (or human) comprehension, and beyond this point, there is no going back.

    First Published
    25th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Aug 2012
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    After establishing himself in Ponyville, Comet's friends come to a disturbing realization. This is his story in showing everyone in Ponyville that anyone can change for the better, even someone who's got their head in the clouds.

    First Published
    16th Oct 2011
    Last Modified
    29th Feb 2012