The devilishly funny tale of a demon learning more than he ever expected to about ponies, sin, and himself.
Kiriel is one fed up demon. Fed up with being stuck in Hell, and fed up with tormenting the damned (a thankless task if there ever was one!). So he's going to take a little break, vacationing on Equus in a slightly used body of a certain four-legged mammal...
[May contain topics unsuitable to younger audiences. Viewer discretion is advised.]
When a new pony comes into town, Pinkie tries to welcome her, but the mare insults Pinkie and hits her. With all the names the pony called Pinkie, she changes her looks and personality, thinking she is all those names. Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity try to get Pinkie to realize that she is normal and special just the way she is.
Twilight was slowly coming to grips with the fact that her side-job of 'Ponyville Private Investigator' was never going to pan out. Now, though, the biggest whodunit of her unimpressive career falls into her lap. With the dubious 'help' of her assistant, Pinkie Pie, she sets out to solve one last mystery.
Contest: The first person to correctly guess the identity of the Kingpin in the comments wins a one-shot fanfic commission by me! Difficulty: You only get one guess. Use it wisely!A comedy-mystery full of suspense and fun Twilight vs. Pinkie bickering! Minds will be blown. Chapter lengths may be erratic and sometimes very short, but I will be adding two chapters every day. (24 chapters and 14,800 words total.)
Proofreading by RaylanKrios.
WARNING: Excessive smiling may result in major cases on minor mania; heart palpitations, or a rare case of palpitating palpitations of the heart; inexplicable bouts of laughter; convulsions of the chest due to aforementioned inexplicable bouts of laughter; loss of breath due to aforementioned convulsions of the chest due to inexplicable bouts of laughter; loss of hunger; loss of libido; loss of vocal cords; loss of possessions due to somepony who doesn’t smile; loss of life due to somepony who doesn’t smile; loss of thoughts; loss of thoughts about thinking; loss of attention to surroundings; loss of any care in the world; loss of virginity; loss of the loss of virginity, or a curious penchant for repetition.
If any of these side effects surface, keep smiling. Everything will be just fine.
Taking home the last train from Canterlot, or that one odd taxi, can have bad consensuses-especially when you find yourself in front of a run down hotel. Both a mare and stallion must walk the halls avoiding guests and the head of house, who want to keep them there. Insanity is a threat, but it gets worse as the nights go on.
Angel Star plans on moving to Ponyville, but as soon as she discovers that her friend is planning something for her she tries to find out what it is.
Please note that this is my first attempt at a Fanfic, and that I wanted to explain my OC a little bit. Don't be surprised if you see a mistake here or there.