Innocence
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After an argument, Noteworthy decides to take his love, Octavia, for a drive in the car to try and figure out a way to make things better. However, they continue to argue, and Noteworthy loses control in the car, landing them in a ditch after a few flips off the highway from Ponyville to Canterlot. Octavia is critically injured in the seat beside him while she was still mad at him. Noteworthy wonders in his mind how did things all go wrong, and he begs and pleads that Octavia will survive the accident.
This story was inspired by the song Innocence by The Airborne Toxic Event, one of the most beautiful and passionate songs ever performed in my opinion. This story is in the first person as narrated by Noteworthy. In this story the ponies have mostly modern technology.
It is something that I wanted to try out, so hopefully it works. If it is crap just let me know so that I can stop myself from going any further. Also, please point out any mistakes! Here's what I have so far. It's something I have had in my mind for a while and I am trying to get it to work. Do you guys think that it's worth it to continue? I know some people will say that Octavia is like a Mary-Sue character in this story, but to be honest, we know absolutely nothing about her or Noteworthy, so they can be anything I want them to be :D































