//------------------------------// // Well, I'm just gonna say it... // Story: Equestria meets the Vasto Lorde. // by Phoenix Archangel //------------------------------// In short? I fucked up... majorly. And I'm not saying that because of all the plot crevices in the story ('cos face it; saying their plot holes is like saying Niagra Falls is a trickle... from a distance, it's true, but the moment you get up close and personal with it...) that have been pointed out. Seriously, if you read the last blog, I said the author in my head couldn't find the story and the desk was covered in papers? I finally got the memo from the guy; turns out, all the stuff you guys've pointed out to me? Probably four to six pages worth. The rest of the paperwork? All of it was issues with the storyline, how it was going, where it was going, what was going to happen... you get the drift. The author then wrote two suggestions for me to decide (since I'm the asshole who has to sign this crap... being the primary personalty is such a drag sometimes): 1: Complete overhaul, which means getting all the files related to Vasto Lorde and loading them into this nice little incinerator I got just down the hall. It also means you guys'll be waiting even damn longer while I get the team into the Story Room for planning. 2: Vasto Lorde goes into cold storage... a.k.a it's gonna disappear from my mind permanently in about... eh, I give it a week, week an' half tops. By now, you can guess which I've gone with. So, as of now the story is Cancelled, but if anyone wants to pick it up and take this egg that I picked up from Bradledew and hatch it fully, go for it. And if you check my blog after this you'll see where I was gonna take the story, as well as an announcement. It's been a blast writing this (when it flowed anyways).