[Author's Note: Well Here we are, Season Finale of mlp also, Hopefully, The last chapter of my "Very first fanfic"
and the Oscar goes to.. well me of course . I would like to thank you all for the constructive Criticism, Most of it being the same, but, Don't you fret, I have taken note to it and i have corrected most i can see but i really need a editor if i want this to shine.
As for other Fanfics(fimfics) I'm hurrying this up because I'm getting ready for making another one hopefully second really is best. so without further stalling let get this done! also i added something to help you ponies from getting lost
(when you see "~" that it means I'm changing perspectives it should be easy because of the two main characters)
( this "-" means what is normally does, Change of time change of place )
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So Lets Just assume you all watched the wedding already and lets say I'm not going by the Original plot and I'm going to play
with it a little you'll see what i mean when you read it]
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Part 1 The Hunt for Knowledge
"This was it.. The Day EveryPony would Be aware of my discovery The day i will sit on the throne of history.. Lyra.. The ,, Anthropologist.. Lyra The Great ... Lyra The- " Lyra's Thoughts were disturbed by a large white light, followed by a purple that stood for about thirty seconds then left the sky with a shy bright blue tone. Lyra looked out the fairly dirty barn window to a front row seat to something she was not expecting.
Across From ponyville and into the horizon stood a large Castle, Canterlot, Home of the unicorns, Castle of the princess, Lyra's
Birthplace. But this large castle that stood on the cliff side everyday was not what grabbed the lime green unicorns attention,
It was the airspace around it. Canterlot castle the once colorful castle with clearly visible shape was now covered in a large pink dome. The dome spanned across the area of the castle, the hollow dome made it almost impossible to shape out what was inside of it.
Lyra's door opened up to a familiar human, X. Lyra looked at the human then back out the window, blushing. It seemed hard for Lyra to look at him for anytime she did a clearly visible blush would grown on her, she never knew why feeling occurred nor did she want them to but it was clear the human feels them to.
The Human then joined Lyra at the window.
"Hey Lyra, What is that?"
The human pointed at the pink dome that covered the mountainside. Lyra was more fascinated by its fingers, how they worked. The human noticed this then curled his fingers into a fist. Lyra then followed the direction the fist was pointing to, though, she already knew what he meant
"Its a magic barrier, probably for the wedding." "Lyra's Frown Explained exactly what was wrong.Then it hit him,
"Wait.. Were going there?.. in there? "
" Don't worry i know someone in the wedding, I'll be disguised as one of the bridesmaids." Lyra Indicated to a dress hung on the bed frame.
"Wow Lyra.,, That's great and all.. but there's a small problem.."
"And whats that?"
"Me..."
X walked up to the stained window
"Chances are,, The barrier is not just there for the wedding... Celestia Must know of our plan"
Lyra Hopped off the bed trotted to the left of X
"And what makes you say that?, nopo- no one else noes of our plan so unless you told her..." Lyra said jokingly .
X, now looking at Lyra sighed "This Celestia character, she has been ruling for over one thousand years or even more,
And you and i are only sixteen, I'm sure that any plan we think of... Celestia already has many counter measures in place."
Looking back at the barrier and back to Lyra.
" i want revenge yes, but this is insane. How do you plan on getting me even to this castle, chances are we would get caught before we can even get to the barrier, its not like I'm a pony-!"
X stopped after hearing what he just said but it was too late, Lyra;s sharp ears picked up the last words that came out of his regretting tongue, Lyra had another idea.
"Oh, No don't even let that idea get to you head. I have no experience with magic but a transformation spell is totally out of the question!"
But it was too late, once a idea crossed Lyra, it will never leave her.
Lyra Smiled as her horn began to glow. X tried to move but he was unable to, as if he was being held onto.
A purple string of magic circled him from the legs up, like a python, as the ribbon like raw magic almost covered his eyes
her horn glow started to dull and the magic began to fade. X was finally able to move again. he looked up and down and back at Lyra.
"Um Lyra? I don't think your spell worked, I'm still a human." Lyra turned to him with a rather annoyed face
"Well, duh, That's because i didn't do it yet, Even if i did turn you into a pony we would still need to sneak you though the barrier. You may fool the ponies but you wouldn't fool magic or Celestia"
X looked around, They were back at the abandoned camp. X looked for any reason they may still be here then back to see that Lyra was now headed into a large tent.
"So, um.. Lyra.. What exactly are we looking fo-"
"Shut up.." Lyra said suddenly, X cocked his head slightly and did as he was told.
X was curious, as to Lyra's abnormal attitude,, she seemed more... Crazy , Crazier then normal.
X's thought were Cut off by a talking Lyra,
"This is the fist tent i was in.. this book" Lyra picked up a red book with her mouth and tossed it at the X's feet.
Instantly x stepped back, one leg lifted, He knew what it was..
"So you know what this is.. don't you?"
X gave a sky, sheepish nod.
"This is a black magic book, such magic only that darkest of my kind posses the ability to use... Why do you ask?"
Lyra's Angry face turned into a smile. The smile that X knew all too well, the smile he witnessed minutes ago when he thought he was going to become a pony,
"We need this book. My magic is not strong enough to turn you into anything but a rat. and certainly cant open a gap in this barrier and will not stand a chance to three Alicorns at once."
"And?..."
"And The last time i tried to use this book it almost took over me."
Lyra Blushed and opened the book.
A voice familiar to Lyra was heard in the tent, this time x heard it too.
"Well Well Well look who decided to show their face back in my pages, I thought i scared you off last time you opened me"
"I'm sorry i disobeyed you book of magic, I need you power yet again but this time not to defend."
Lyra said in a rhyme.
The book flipped on its own, violently.
"Lyra's Horn began to glow black again. her eyes turned white, then grey, then black. Lyra could see the fear in X's eyes"
Lyra felt her back bone breaking apart and rebuilding itself with wings. her coat and mane turned multiple shades of grey and black. Lyra's eyes went totally black, she could no longer see anything,
"Ha Ha Heh I have you now, dumb horse i am now your maste- wait no what??"
In the dark of her eyes a white light could be seen. Lyra couldn't move but the light stated to build a form of a hand, a human hand.
"Oh Celestia, Its X.."
Lyra Yelled to the top of her lungs for help Until the hand reached out and grabbed her hoof.
Everything started to light up and soon everything began clear.
"Lyra fell from her standing position and looked around, She was back outside of the tent with x. Her sides were stinging,
she rubbed a hoof down her side to be stopped by something. She turned to see something she never expected to be still there, Wings.
The Large green wing spanned larger then any pegasus wing she has ever seen. She then stopped and felt her head,
her horn, it grew, at least four inches.
She.. she became a alicorn.. one with royalty, no. she was a fraud but.. it was fine she had power. oh so much power..
"And now for you.." Lyra Looked at x who was still traumatized by what he is looking at.
"Wait" X looked at his hand and look at Lyra's hoof, he wanted to run but he knew he couldn't outrun a pony.
X tilted his head, taking his fate.
Lyra than began to laugh "Wait, you honestly think its permanent?, This spell , like any other body altering spell only lasts for three days. "
X looked up face turned from frown to smile to unsure.
"Are you serious?"
"I promise, you'll be back on two legs in three days." Lyra gave the most re assured smile she could produce,
She knew she was right, but she has never tried such a skilled move since school, such lack of experience might turn him into a manticore instead of a pony, and he wouldn't want that, nor does he want to be a pony, in fact, he's about to become the one thing he hates more than anything on this planet.
The irony of that was sickening to both of them.
Lyra's Newly modified horn began to glow as Lyra attempted to recite the words to the spell silently withing her head
This new found power made it easy to pull of such a complicated trick but such a spell couldn't be ignored, it still took some effort.
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The Magic rapped X feet first then to the legs, X looked at Lyra who had her eyes closed the whole time.
"Are you sure this is going to work, I'm kinda nervous,"
Lyra opened one eye to look at x
"Honestly i have no idea, it should work but if it doesn't I'm sorry"
"Wow, Lyra thanks for the words of encoura-" X blacked out.
X opened his eyes to a grassy field. The sky was white as show and the grass was almost too healthy even for Equestria,
X tried to get onto two feet but couldn't. He was still a human but was in a crawling position.
Suddenly the sky instantly turned black, the moon expressed its glorious light upon the green grass.
To the left was a hill,Behind the hill on top of the hill, The black ponies stood,eyes red as blood. muttering, it wasn't clear what they were saying.
The ponies began to gallop towards x. X tried to get up but was still weighed down, he started to crawl.
X knew he couldn't out run the ponies and soon they were on top of him
Their words were understandable now, Human, one said , kill it another whispered, let it go , a smaller one said.
Just then, a bright light lit the sky. X found it Impossible to keep his eyes open.
"Close your eye's" one said
"awaken" said another
x did what he was told and closed his eye's
"X, wake up.. are you dead?.. x wake up!"
X opened his eyes to find himself laying on a rock face to face with Lyra.
"Ugh. Yea I'm okay, Just have a headac-"
X stopped, He looked around and to Lyra, Lyra was looking at him up and down.
"X looked down to the inevitable, He no longer had feet instead, he had hoofs."
X rolled of the rock and onto all fours then collapsed
"Ugh, only three days.." X mumbled
"Lets go, we need to get to the castle"
Before X could say anything they were outside the barrier of magic
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"Next time tell me when your going to teleport me somewhere"
X struggled to get onto four legs. Lyra levitated x up onto four legs again.
X"s new legs buckled then straightened out
"You'll get used to it, let move it the wedding probably already started."
Lyra Touched her horn to the glass like barrier and a small portion of the barrier disappeared.
Lyra pushed levitated x in front of the her and kissed him.. Blush fully turning her face green to cherry x was also blushing
but was too confused to stop her.
When Lyra finished She pushed him into the dome and closed it, blush finally receding she walked away.
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"I cant believe she just did that. She turns me into a pony, throws me in here to fend for myself, and kisses me."
X blushed Then swipes it away.
As ex leaves the garden and onto the castle grounds he almost teared up, Canterlot castle he was here. But not here for a wedding but for revenge.
On top of a spire something caught his eyes he jumped into a bush and poked his head out.
A dark blue Alicorn with a mane that glowed with color dark as the night sky, Princess Luna
He didn't know what to do he just wanted to climb the spire and attack, he looked down at himself and back up to her.
"There was I way he could challenge such a ancient creature as her what was Lyra thinking?"
X's thoughts were cut off by a voice louder then anything he ever heard.
"Who Goes there"
"Twilight is that you? your the best mare and your late? "
"And is that the bride, what in all equestria?
X was too afraid to poke his head up again out of the bush
X was relived to know the Alicorn wasn't talking to her. But it also made it clear that he shouldn't be there either.
X poked his head out from the bush.
"those pony seems in a hurry maybe is should follow her"
X checked that area, no one was outside not even the guards, not even Luna was looking anymore.
X jumped out of the push, stumbled, and got back up to chase after them.
X kept his distance from the two mares and followed far behind, not to far though, X had no idea where he was going.
X stopped at a large door with golden rims and gems encrusted on it, the ribbons and balloons on the door indicated this was the wedding hall.
X hasn't even entered and is already giving second thoughts. the wedding crasher spot was already taken by twilight and the other Alicorn. Why twilight was doing this is unknown. so X sat and watched as the purple unicorn enters first and cries out "STOP!"
The outburst was stopped by gasps and sighs, it was done, the wedding was over.
The pink alicorn then entered the crossfire.
"Because Its not you special day its mine!" said the pink alicorn
"Another wave of gasps could be heard from the room"
X galloped as fast as his new legs would carry him into the room and into one of the crowds, no one seemed to notice him due to this outburst, Lyra was nowhere to be seen.
X looked up to the front, Celestia, looking rather confused, along with five bridesmaids, none being Lyra. What really caught her eyes was the pink Alicorn, it looked exactly like the one he saw before.
Silence Haunted the room for a moment until a familiar orange earth pony spoke up
"I.. I don't understand how could there be two of em?"
All the ponies look at each other and back to the bride.
"She's a Changeling, she takes the form of somepony you love and gains power by feeding off you love for them!"
The pink alicorn bride's eyes turned green and a giant flash of light lit the room in green.
"Great more ancient evil creatures.." X hummed to himself jokingly " maybe if i play my cards right, she will get revenge for me."
Once the green light subsided the bride could now be seen ad to what she really is.
This evil mare.. no, changeling stood taller than any of the other ponies in the hall it may even rival Celestia for true size
This alicorn changeling had a decaying coat the color of coal and eyes greener then moss a cracked, bent, and chipped horn on her head. It looked like a prime example of death itself.
"Right you are, Princess, And as queen of the changelings it is up to me to find food for my subjects. Equestria has more love than any place i have encountered, My fellow changelings will be able to devour so much of it, and then we'll gain more power than we have ever dreamed of!"
"They'll never get the chance, shining armor's protection spell will keep them from even reaching us!"
this is getting nowhere x said in a whisper "but what did she mean changeling army? oh my this is the best revenge ever, i bet that .
if i came into here as a human nopony would notice me. "nopony" i cant believe i just said that.
The changelings horn began to glow
"Oh i doubt that , right dear?"
The changeling looked at shining armor who looked back at them with the most hypnotized look.
"How could he agree with that thing, i wish i could do something, ugh wheres Lyra"
"What did that thing say about the bridesmaids, if shes not up there with them then.. oh no.. what happened to Lyra?"
"Ever since i Took you place i have been feeding off shining armor's love for you, every moment he grows weaker and so does his spell, even now my minions are chipping at it."
Everyone gasped.
"I need to do something to stop this this is getting dangerous, i only wanted revenge on Celestia not revenge on everyone."
X stomped his hoof to the ground, no one noticed.
"He may not be my husband, but he's under my total control now. and I'm sorry to say but unable to perform his duties as captain of the royal guard."
The Pitch black demon let out a evil laugh that followed by gasps and nervous breathing from the audience of ponies viewing it.
"First we'll take canterlot Then all of Equestria!"
That was it, X was about to step forward when another voice came into the argument
"No, you wont, you may have made it impossible for shining armor to perform his spell but now that you have so foolishly
revealed you true self, I shall protect my subjects.. FROM YOU" the voice came from none other than princess Celestia "
Celestia Flew into the air her horn glowed brighter then white itself and beam launched itself from her horn only to be met halfway be a equally bright beam of a different color.
X couldn't believe his eyes a alicorn versus alicorn fight, This, this is exactly what he wanted
X sat down and watched as his will was played out.
And in almost record time The changelings magic over powered Celetia's
Bright lights lit up the room for a second. when the lights faded a tiara flung itself through the air followed by a large horse.
The tiara fell rather silently, Celestia, however did not.
"X got up and ran to the princess. The princess was murmuring something to herself, X puts his ear to her mouth"
Celestia's words became clear
"Go,Human, You are the only one who can save us now." Celestia's words faded then went silent, she's dead.
X backed up then stumbled Six other ponies ran up to her, tears running down their eyes,
x had to run, this creature took down Celestia in on hit. X had to find Lyra, but what did Celestia mean you are the only one who can save us now.
"How did she know i was human?" x looked down at himself, his dark green coat, deemed him equine.
As the six ponies ran out of the room, one of them said "Elements of harmony" X had no clue what that was so he ignored it
First things first he had to find Lyra.
"As X exited the castle, The ground shook and the pink barrier began to crack, on the other side were ponies.. no changelings, they were black colored decaying "things" and they were destroying the barrier"
All the other ponies looked as their precious barrier fell and shattered into small magic shards....
[Author: And done finally i have been typing for almost three hours. Well here it is Fimfic finale part one
i would write more but its..... well 11:00pm i hope you guys like it because i put a lot of work near the end making it word for word. and im sorry for the people i know are gonna complain about celestia dieing.
As for spelling errors there shouldn't be a lot if there is I'm very sorry grammar probably a lot of errors.
but hey :P as long as its still readable that aight? i hope you guys enjoyed this fanfic as much as i do
im cutting this story shot because I'm gonna make another one because my i never thought my fanfic would get 1000+ views, maybe.. a conversion beureu story? maybe .. clop fic ,<-- lol
anyways tell me what you think in the comments below