//------------------------------// // EXTREME makeover part 1 and A.N. // Story: Susan #057 // by FunFunFUN //------------------------------// EXTREME make over part 1 Knock knock knock I’m not opening that door. “I’m taking a shower!” I yell. “Come on Susan, its gone there’s nothing here to harm you!” A muffled voice says behind the door. Octavia…that t-that thing grabbed me….GRABBED ME and to make it worse…it smiled at me! “Come on Octy, it isn't that bad.” Vinyl says behind the door. I am not leaving this bathroom for the night! “Oh Vinyl shut-Susan please open the door!” More knocking. Damn it! I climb out of the bathtub and unlocked the door. I see Octavia with a messy mane and pink stripped pajamas and Vinyl with nothing on rubbing her…sunglasses. “Look, I must apologize for my friend’s bedroom status.” I held up my hand. “Don’t worry about it, I’ll just sleep here.” “The bathroom, oh no I can’t let you do that.” She looks at the bathroom in disgust; I don’t know why the room is spotless. “Just get me a bunch of blankets and I’ll make do with that.” She stares at me then slightly smiles. “I have a better idea.” She walks away, me and Vinyl just looks at each other and shrug. Next thing I know a pile of blankets hit Vinyl. “She will be taking the bathroom and you will be in the room with me.” Vinyl gets up with a surprised look, so did I! “Oh don’t look like that Vinyl, you put yourself in this problem no you have to sleep with it.” She smiles evily-ish. I could help but chuckle and Vinyl staring at me makes it even funnier. Octavia walks away heading towards her room I guess. “So what you have a bunk bed or something?” I ask following. ~Octavia’s room~ “No” “Oh it’s alright.” “No.” “Why not?” “Cause it’s a single bed…I don’t want to...you know take up so much space.” I scratch the back of my head. “Oh I assure you quite fine.” I walked up to the bed and sat down. I saw Octavia lay down and pat the spot next to her. Great. I lay down next to her.This is so weird, it’s like I failed to bring a sleeping bag to a slumber party! I could help but stare at Octavia; she seems so peaceful laying down like that. I poke her mane gently. She opens her eyes surprised. “Uhhh…yes?” “Nothing, wondering how you get your hair so shinny.” I lie blushing. “Yeah, I wash it…you know you could wash it, right?” Of course I don’t, “I don’t know how to…could you show me?” She looks at me wide eyed. Oh god that face! “O-of course!” She closes her eyes once more. I get close to her face, nose to snout, and whisper. ”That’s awesome…we're like sisters now.” She smiles, “You remind me of Vinyl so much…” her eyes turn half lid,”…I like that.A lot.” I move my face away and blushed so hard. “You got that Vinyl I bet.” I turn away blushing so hard. I hear her chuckle. “I learn from the best, now let’s get some sleep, we have to get you some new clothes.” I yawn. “Where from, human never made it here yet.” “I have a friend that could help you with that.” I close my eyes. Oh that should be nice. ~Next morning: Ponyville- Carousel boutique~ Ring ring “Welcome to the carousel boutique, where everything is-WHAHAHA!” Vinyl tackles the white pony to the ground. “Rarara! Nice to see you again!” She squeezes harder. “Umm Vinyl she seems to be unable to breath.” I say hoping that she doesn't end up kill a pony. “Oh…yeah” She lets go and Octavia help her up. “Hello cousin, Ms. Octavia, and you are…” She looks at me. I raise a hand out, “Susan, Susan Strife and you are?” She shakes my hand. Yup grip. “Rarity, Lady Rarity if you may.” I see she very fancy, God she so pale white it like a… “So Rara can you give my friend the hook up on some clothes?” Vinyl comes in wrapping one arm around my legs. Rarity smiles brightly. “I've been waiting to do some work on Humans ever since Twilight announced that they will be coming here!” She rubs her hooves together. While Rarity gathered her things. Vinyl and Octavia walked up to me. “Can’t believe we’re cousins sometimes.” Vinyl says smiling. “I can you both look like you came out the same marshmallow bag.” Octavia and I laugh, Vinyl frowns, then walks away talking to herself. That’s a good one! I got to use that again someday. Rarity walks up quickly. “Come, come we must get to work!” Getting a little excited here aren't ya, its only the first date. “What’s the rush ?” She turn to look at me. “You said you wanted a full make over, did you not?” What? “What?” I asked wide-eyed She drags me with her glowing thingy…magic. I turn to Octavia and Vinyl and…Vinyl Is waving and grinning. That little…”MARSHMALLOW!!!!!!” ~A.N.~ Hey everyone Funfun here just stayin that you guys are awesome! I know this is a really short chapter but school got in and I'm sick so yeah that sucks. I couldn't leave you guys having like that. So I just made this one and the next one will be really soon(maybe). Ummm...like, favorite, share with friends oh god I need the views. Oh and I do OC's too in a little bit. And yes there with be a little shipping here too. If you don't like it bare with it. Please. DON"T ARGUE WITH ME!!!