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// Ch.5 Veetrix's Sin! 
// Story: Veetrix, Equestria's Best Shot! 
// by trahzo 
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"Before we fight for one final time, I must tell you something honestly, my origin!"

*Flashback!*

"Veetrix, do you remember the time you fell in love for the 1st time?"

"What do you mean?"

"I'm telling you how I was created idiot, you must know why I am known a Cyn!"

"No..."

"That's right! When you & your cousin fell in love with each other..."

Then we see a younger Veetrix & his cousin sitting in the middle of a meadow holding hands.

"That 1st kiss...oh wont Mallie be devastated that it wasn't with her?"

"You leave her out of this! I fell in love with Mallie because she filled that void in my heart and we met waaaaaaaaay after I..." Then Veetrix looked down and we are given a scene where Veetrix pushes his cousin off of a bridge!

"Ah Veetrix, trying to reject a shameful act you committed during your teenage years."

Then we get a scene where Veetrix is laughed at

"You had sex with your cousin? Freak!"

"Yeah, get outta here!"

"We don't want disgusting scoundrels like you here at school!"

"They all made fun of me...I had to kill her, I didn't want anyone to think that I loved her enough to let my kid know that his father is also his uncle." (I know I may be referencing an old movie, but please shut-up!)

"Yessss...after you tried covering away that horrid past, they still teased & bullied you! So much hatred & despair is what you felt! So in order to get away from them...you grew-up and enlisted into the army! After you were relieved from duty, you became an assassin, but you still felt regret!"

"Enough of this, what does my life story have to do with your ori..." Then it all clicked "...No way!"

"Yes Veetrix, I am your past sin!"

"It all adds-up when we met that very day!"

"Yes, I was the embodiment of all of your negative emotions plus the death of your cousin, who's name you could never remember!"

"Yeah..."

"But I sure do remember who it was you killed! Alice Xargashio, the daughter of your precious Captain!"

Then everyone gasped.

"I...fucked then killed my...captain's...daughter..." Then he fell to the floor with no-hope left. "...but how's that possible? I never even met the captain back when I met Alice!"

"Let's go to the back of that mind..."

Then we see a younger Deezutra meet a younger Veetrix.

"Hello child, I am your uncle Deezutra...huh?" Then Deezutra looked to his left. "Hey, don't ignore me child!"

"Hello, I'm Veetrix."

"Hello there, I'm Alice."

"Let's have fun together..."

Then Veetrix looked at the scene with traumatized eyes.

"Isn't this just laughable?"

*Flashback over!*

"There's no-more hope for me...I wanted to forget what I've done, but you pulled me back into these dark memories." Then he began crouching.

"Yes, just sit there, as I kill you!"

Cyn charged his attack, but that's when...

"Veetrix, don't let the past get you down! If it means anything to make you feel better, I forgive you!"

"C-Captain?" He turned and Shogun Deezutra was standing right next to him. "I mean...Uncle."

"Heh!"

"What the, how'd he get in here?" Twilight said.

"Oh, I just got help from the Sparity children & my wife to break through. I entered as soon as you said that you were the one who fucked & killed my daughter."

"Uncle, I'm so sorry!"

"Hey don't worry about it, I used to feel the same way once about my Aunt, but I got over it, just like how you got over it with Mallie right?"

"Yeah, I managed to let it go with Mallie! Uncle, thank you for giving me my 2nd wind! Cyn, you maybe the embodiment of my sins, but everyone gets a 2nd chance!"

Then Deezutra raised his sword, and Veetrxi raised his gun!

"Yeah! Great to see you smile again!" Pinkie said.

"Ready Private?"

"Yes Captain!"