. Just radom notes about changes in this story
This story was initially submitted last July. After revisting the story on this site I realized the rating was wrong, it should be TEEN due to both Luna's and Uber's deaths. Rainbow dash doesn't count since she came back to life. Also there is some actual not ponyized swear words like shit and ass, this maybe minor but enough that it should be teen IMO.
Plus it was posted incomplete instead of complete, this was and is just a one shot parody.
HOWEVER the biggest change was in Ditzy Doo, she now morphed into Derpy Hooves in my story. Last summer it was still very much in the air whether the grey wall-eyed pegasus was called Ditzy Doo or something else. Some posting I read stated Studio B was calling her Ditzy, and she (wall-eyed grey pegasus) was the pony refered to as Ditzy in Winter Wrap-up. But I was also aware of the fan base calling her Derpy Hooves instead. I had NOTHING against the name Derpy, I just liked the alliterate name Ditzy Doo better at the time and figured most readers would realize this was also Derpy.
But since the Last Round-up fiasco, with first calling her Derby and having a deep (for a filly) slow voice, then removing the name "Derby" and giving her a higher pitch "cutesy" vioce in the I-Tunes version. I agree her name IS Derby Hooves from now on and I changed my story to reflect that.
BTW "The Last Round-up" wasn't changed on the HUB On Demand channel when it ran the last 2 weeks of February. But it also has not been re-aired on the HUB itself yet. It is the only episode not showed again since its initial air date, so until it finially airs again we (the fans) won't know if all versions of TLR are to be editted or just the I-Tune version.
P.S. I actually like the cutesy vioce better, it is more like I thought Derpy should sound, but I don't agree with dropping her name, changing her eyes, or changing the frustrated tone of RB to a more conciliatory one.