//------------------------------// // Author's Note // Story: On the Subject of Weather and Mentality // by The DJ Rainbow Dash //------------------------------// Normally I don't write these as actual chapters of stories, its not how I usually do things. Anyway, to anybody reading, I'd really like you're feedback mostly on two different things about the story. 1. Did you find it confusing how there were quotes and flashbacks within her journal entries? These weren't actually written in the journal, but they were used for better context. 2. How did the story flow overall? A lack of comments has given me really no idea how people view this, so hopefully you all will see this and leave me your thoughts. Thanks for reading, DJRD