How To Write An MLP Fanfiction

by CharibasaHooves


Workpony and the Tree

It was the third day. It was a bright afternoon and Rainbow's left wing was fully recovered. She still can't fly though. When she first attempted to fly, she was literally flying in circles. So she continued on writing the fanfic. When she was about to continue the fanfic, her quill is gone.She searched everywhere for it, but she didn't find it. She also ran out of scrolls. The blue pegasus began to go arouund the library to Twilight's bedroom in search of another quill and more scrolls. While she was finding a new quill, her friend Applejack came into the library.

"Howdy, Rainbow. have ya seen-"

"Can't talk, too busy finding a quill and some scrolls." Rainbow said quickly as she searched on every drawer.

"Why, sugarcube?" Applejack asked.

"'Cause I'm making a fanfiction. That's why."

Applejack looked at her rushing to every drawer in the library, until she saw a bunch of blank scrolls and a black feather. "Uh, Rainbow Dash. Is this what you're looking for?"

Rainbow looked at the workpony's hooves holding the stuff she was finding and said, "Oh thank you Applejack! You're a lifesaver."

"No problem." She replied. "Hey, you're making one of those fancy little stories, are ya?"

"Yup! I've been reading that book Twilight gave to me since a few days ago." She immediately gets the book and showed it to her, "I mean. Look at this. Funny stories, sad stories, it's mixing up all of my emotions. I'm determined, motivated and inspired to make a fanfiction that will be so popular!"

"Uhh Rainbow, I'm not sure if that story ya pointing on is a funny story." Rainbow looked at the story that she was pointing to Applejack and saw a picture of her filly self in a cardboard box.

"Oh. Sorry about that." She then threw the book and landed on the table. "Anyways, how was your tree?"

"Ya mean Bloomberg? Oh shucks, she was a beauty! She's still in Appleloosa and is taken care of Braeborn and the other ponies in them place." She started to cry happily, "Oh I remembered when I and that big 'ol tree met..."


I was just a litle filly back then. The Sweet Apple Acres before was only a quarter of the Sweet Apple Ares today. I was walking all the way to Ponyville with Granny Smith and Big Mac to buy some food. I mean, we don't always eat apples or that'll cause food poisoning.

"Food poisoning?"

"I dunno! Somepony said that to me..."

Just as we were done buying them food at the market, we got a letter from the Orange Family from Manehattan,

Dear Applejack,

We all know you came back to your home. Instead, we would be delighted if you bring your entire family with you and stay with us for two nights in Manehattan. We at the Orange Family missed you. And we haven't seen the Apple Family yet so this is gonna be exciting. We hope you can be there soon.

Sincerely,
Aunt and Uncle Orange

I was surprised at this. I haven't seen the Orange Family for three years since I found the way back home because of your little rainbow thing. It took us 3 days to get there by Bic Mac pulling a big wagon. We brought supplies of food and water when we were going to Manehattan. Finally that night, we were already there.

Big Mac was scared. He haven't seen such huge buildings, concrete floors and hostile citizens in the city. The apartment where the Orange Family was living was 10 blocks away. We stopped by an apple shop. Granny Smith and Big Mac were buying food for us. Until I found a potted plant on the top shelf. That was Bloomberg. I tried getting it from the top shelf but I can't reach it since I was a little filly. I jumped from a chair, to the counter, and then the top shelf just to get Bloomberg off the shelf. I finally got it but the shelf collapsed.

"Excuse me mam. May I buy this potted plant?" I said sincerely.

"That would be 2 bits." We were so lucky that they were at that price back then. We bought the potted plant and I said, "I'm gonna name ya 'Bloomberg'." I had such a fun time in Manehattan, especially when Bloomberg came to me. We were always together..I would water him and leave him to grow and.... and....

"What is that word again?"

"Photosynthesize?" Rainbow answered.

"Yeah! That one."

A few days later, the Apple Family and I were packing up all of our stuff to go back to Ponyville. I was finding Bloomberg when one of Aunt Orange's sons were in my room. He was looking around the room, until he accidentally bumped Bloomberg off the edge of the balcony since my room had a small balcony.

I was furious. I almost cried! I decided to find him. I'm determined to find him. Apparently Bloomberg landed on a wagon full of hay. That was so close but the wagon moved as I came out of the apartment so I chased the wagon. I was eventualy lost at the bus streets. Everypony was moving all over the place. They were so tall that I can't see the wagon anywhere.

Running on the streets was inefficient to me. Instead, I climbed up a building using the stairs at their side and jumped from rooftop to rooftop. From there, I can see the wagon where Bloomberg landed. Everypony was looking at me. I was rushing and running. I jumped off a building and landed straight to the wagon. Everypony gave a big round off applause for making such a 'heroic' act.

"Wait. That was heroic?!"

"it sure is! Them people in Manehattan are hostile yet nice."

Granny Smith and Big Mac came to me and embraced me. I was safe all that time. And I was so happy that Bloomberg is fine. When we came back to Sweet Apple Acres, I planted the tree right next to our house. A few years later, it grew to a big tree! I realized that time that it was time to bring it to another place, and Appleloosa was the place I was looking for. It was replanted on a hill and I am proud to have this tree. His beauty can be seen in all of Appleloosa. If maybe, just maybe, I can just see that big, strong tree right now from the distance...


Rainbow thought for a moment, she had an idea and said, "I think you can." She then went outside. Applejack followed her. The pegasus carried Applejack to the skies even though her right wing is partially recovered. As they went higher and higher, Applejack saw a large desert with a small town in it - Appleloosa. She then finds her tree and it was on a small hill in that town. The blazing sunset made it more than just a moment.

"It looks.... beautiful...." Applejack said. She started to cry. Cries of happiness and joy ran down from her.

"Y-Yeah.... I-I-I know." Rainbow replied as she tries to get rid of the pain she is having from her right wing.

When they safely landed. Rainbow's right wing worsened. She then tries to get back from the library. Applejack was so happy. Her tears were still running.

"Thanks, Rainbow. Ya sure made my day!"

"Hey! That's what friends are for. Right?" She then left the library with a hoof as a sign of goodbye. Rainbow also waved her hoof as well. At night, she went back to her bed and sleep. She can still feel the pain from her right wing though. Outside the window, there was Luna and Nightmare Moon still chasing at each other.