So I basically wrote these in one sitting and released chapters on several-day intervals. So i thought I would submit to EQD but i thought of a similar story, but basically make the 1st chapter into several. More focus on her friends and such. Basically each chapter for each of her friends. That was my original idea but a friend said to add the other chapters about Celestia and luna and such. Basically i'm gonna make a new story. I'll just call it the Reunion. I will write all the parts again but with more care. DONT RUIN THE ENDING FOR READERS ON TEH NEW STORY