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// Rewrite, anyone? 
// Story: A Broken Heart 
// by ICrackVideoGames 
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Allo, everyone! As you may not know, this is actually my first story! And it's the most disgusting piece of crap i've ever written! And I will actually rewrite this in a better way, if you want, or I will continue it anyway. Please tell me!