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// A Thundering Problem 
// Story: Your Little Adventure 
// by My Only Weakness 
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Chapter 11



Chapter 11

Time - 10:35

You wake up to see Rainbow's head on your chest and her arms around you with a smile on her face

You look over to your left to see your brother sitting on his bed with a huge smile

"Well Well Well” he says
you start to blush
"Oh, come on little bro, you two look cute together"
You ignore him and look down at Dash, 
Awww she looks of peaceful
"You know little bro, you have to teach me how to get girls to do that"
you just roll your eyes
Rainbow starts to wake up
She lifts up her eyelids slowly revealing her beautiful eyes
"Well good morning" you say to her
"Morning" she says back to you with a smile
The two of you look into each other’s eyes

"I'll leave you two alone" your brother says walking out the room

"Err Dash, can you maybe get of me please?"
"Can we just stay like this for a while?"
"But we-"
"Please?" she cuts you off and looks at you with her trademark puppy dog eyes
"I guess we can" you say
A smile appears on her face

You lay on your bed with dash's head still on your chest,
After what seems like 10 minutes dash speaks
"What do you see me as?" she asks
...That was unexpected
"Well where do I begin? you’re a cocky Pegasus who calls herself the best flyer in Equestria"
"Only because it's true"
"I also see you as the very talented, caring, wonderful pony, and I wouldn't want you any other way"
She blushes
"What do you see me as?" you ask her
"I see you as the most caring, loveable, and the sweetest, Pegasus I have ever met"
You smile
"Dash can you get off me please?"
"No"
"Dash come on, we need to get to the train back to Ponyville"
She groans and gets off you
You get out of bed, grab your saddle bag, and you strap it around you. The two of you walk down the stairs and enter the living room, where your family looks at you

"Well, I guess this is goodbye, again"

As your family all say their good byes, you hear them all say 'it was nice meeting you' to dash

The two of you walk out the front door and into the forest. You give your final wave to your family and disappear into the forest 

As the two of you emerge from the forest and walk your way down the street, dash smiles and says
"Race you to the train station"
"You’re on" you reply





Time - 10:40

You land at the train station before dash does
"I win"
"Only because you did those wing tricks, that help you go fast, you cheater"
You chuckle
"So when is the train coming?"

As if on cue the train horn blows
"Right now" you say with a smile
The train stops in front of you
You and Dash hand your train tickets to the ticket pony and he lets you on
You find two seats, you sit down in one and dash sits in the other

"So how long is the trip?" dash asks you
"About an hour and a half"
"Alright, good" she rest her head on your shoulder "Wake me up when we get there" she says closing her eyes
"Will do"





Time - 12:10

"Dash" you say shaking her lightly "we're here"
"huh?" she says opening her eyes slowly
"We're here"
"really?"
"Nope"
"You jerk"
"I'm only joking, we're actually here"
The train comes to a stop, you and dash get out of your seats and head towards the door, the door opens revealing 5 other ponies
"YAY, YOU’RE HOME, YOU’RE HOME, YOU’RE HOME" says pinkie bouncing up and down
"Yes pinkie we are" says Dash
"How was your trip Star?" ask twilight
"It was alright, too long for my liking" you say as all seven of you walk out the train station
"And how are your parents?" Rarity asks you
"They’re fine, good, and healthy, although my sister was scared that I might have gotten hurt while I was here"
"Well that's not going to happen, Ponyville has all types of nice ponies" says Applejack
(A/N I don't know how to type in a way that sound like Apple Jack)
"That's what I said"
All you laugh as you walk though Ponyville
"Since you guys are back, you know that this calls for?"
All you stay silent. You all know what’s coming
"A PARTY!!!"
"How did I know?" you say
"I GOT TO GO SET UP, SEE YOU GUYS LATER"
Without any warning she speeds off

As the six of you walk through the town walking, talking and laughing you reach your house
"Well it was nice seeing you guys, but I think I'm going to have a quick nap before the party"
In the corner of your eye you can see that dash is a little upset
"See you at the party" says Twilight
"Yep see you guys there"

You unlock your door and walk into the house
OH DEAR CELESTIA it's exactly the same
You walk upstairs, to you bedroom, unstrap your saddle bag, fall onto your bed and close your eyes





Time 3:00

You wake up to some knocking on the door
You lift yourself up and walk down stairs, you walk towards the door and open it, on the other side of the door was a Pegasus that you were told to stay away from
"Hey Star"
"Er, Hey Cloudchaser"
"So the rumors are true, you’re back"
"Yes I am, Now that you know that the rumors are true, what do you want?"
"I just thought I would stop by and see how you were doing"
"Good"
You just wanted her to get away from you, not because ThunderLane told you, but it’s just didn't like her
"Are you going to invite me in?"
"Nope"
She giggles "You’re silly"
You roll your eyes
She just looks at you with a smile
You sigh and open the door a bit wider
Without you saying a word she walks into your house
Rude
"This is a nice place you got here"
"Yes, Now if you could just-"
"Take a seat? Love to" she saying cutting you off and walking into your living room
How rude is this pony?
She takes a seat on one end of your sofa
You sigh again and take a seat opposite her
"How are your parents?" she asks you
"Good" you say
"What’s the matter? Don’t you want to talk to your friend Cloudchaser?" she says while pouting her lower lip
If you’re trying to be cute, it's not working
"No not really"
She giggles again "you’re funny"
You roll your eyes, raised as a good stallion you get up from your seat
"Would you like a drink?"
"Yes please"
"Anything in particular?"
"Just water please"
You walk into your kitchen and pull out a glass from the cabinet. You fill the glass with water from the sink and walk back into the living room, handing the drink to Cloudchaser
"Thank you" she says taking the glass
"You’re welcome" you say sitting back down

After she finishes the glass she looks around the room
"Hey, what’s that?" she asks pointing at your certificate
"Oh, it's just a certificate I won"
"What for?"
"When I broke a record"
"For what?"
"A race"
"When?"
"When I was 6"
"What is the time?"
"Cloudchaser, if you just came here just to waste my time and ask stupid questions, now is not the time"
"Sorry"
You look out the window to see ThunderLane staring red hot daggers at you
"I think you should go"
"But I hav-"
"Go" you say pointing towards the door
She gets up from your sofa and walks towards the door,
You hear the door open and close
You continue looking out the window, ThunderLane is on longer there

You look at the clock 3:15

You decide to go upstairs and continue your nap





Time - 6:30

You wake up again to knocking on the door. You walk down stairs and open a door, standing at the door is your favorite neighborhood Rainbow Dash

"Hey dash, what brings you here?"
"The Party duh"
"What?"
"The party it started 15 minutes ago"
"Really? I thought it started a 7:00"
"Well it didn’t, Come on we need to go, Pinkie hates it when her guest of honor is late. She starts freaking out"
"Oh, okay" you shut the door behind you and the two of your fly off to sugar cube corner 






The two of you land in front of the sugar cube corner and walk inside
"Oh goody your here, I was starting to get worried that the two of you weren't going to show up so I got scared that the whole party was going to be ruined and-"
"Pinkie, it's fine you know I wouldn't miss one of your parties" you say trying to calm her down
She takes in a deep breath and exhaled
"Okay, NOW LET’S GET THIS PARTY STARTED"



 

After you have a drink of apple cider and dance around, you sit at a table and ThunderLane comes up to you
"Hey Star can I talk to outside for a minute"
"What for?"
"I just want to talk"
"Then why can’t we talk here"
"Because it’s something I don't want others to hear"
"The music pretty loud, I doubt no one can hear you"
"Come outside damn it"
"Okay Okay"
The two of you walk out of sugar cube corner
"This isn't about Cloudchaser is it?" you ask
"No, it isn't" he leads you to the back of the shop "and by no, I mean yes"
3 other ponies come out from the shadows
"I knew it"
"I told you to stay away from her and you do the exact opposite"
"I didn't want her in my house alright, she just walked in" 
Soon you are surrounded in a circle
"Grab him"
You are then grabbed by two of the ponies, you try to break free, but they’re much stronger then you are, they then lift you up on to your hind legs 
"I'm going to enjoy beating the snot out of you"
"ThunderLane look you don't need to-"
You are then cut off by ThunderLane kicking you in the stomach, you let out painful grunt. He kicks you in the stomach again.
They let go of you and you fall to the floor in pain
"Aww did that hurt? Well this will hurt more"
He then kicks you in the stomach again and you roll on your back, ThunderLane then stomps on your right arm with force, you scream out in pain. One of the ponies covers your mouth with his hoof. ThunderLane walk over to your right hind leg and stomps on it, you scream again but the scream doesn't come out because of the pony covering your mouth. ThunderLane does the same thing with your left legs, stomping on them.
"Grab his wings" he barks at the other ponies "Keep his mouth shut" he says to the pony covering your mouth

The two ponies extend your wings and hold them to the ground, you try to flap your wings but to no success, they’re too strong for you

ThunderLane walks over to your right wing
"I hope you enjoyed the times you been flying, because those were your LAST" he then stomps on your wing
You scream out in pain, which gets out into the air
"I TOLD YOU TO KEEP HIS MOUTH SHUT!!" ThunderLane yells
"Sorry I slipped"
ThunderLane then walks over to your left wing and does the same thing.
You scream again, but it doesn't get out into the air this time 
"Get him up" 
The three ponies get you up on to your knees
ThunderLane bucks you right in the jaw, 
Little bits of blood fly out of your mouth
He bucks you in the Jaw again
More blood flies out your mouth
"Is three the lucky number? Well, let’s see if three will end it"
He is about to bucks you again,

"What do y'all think you’re doing?" says a huge voice with a southern accent

You look over to see a huge red coated stallion with an angry look on his face
The ponies that are holding you let go and you fall to the hard floor
ThunderLane and the other ponies fly off into the night sky

You try to get up onto your hoofs, but your legs were badly damaged
"STARGAZER!!" you hear 6 voices call out
"Are you Okay dear?" asks Rarity with a very worried tone
You vision is very blurry
"Star speak to us" says Twilight with the same amount of worries
You go to say something, but a pool of blood comes out of your mouth
Rarity, Twilight, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie scream
"OH MY CELESTIA, ARE YOU ALRIGHT?" shouts Apple Jack
"Star come on speak to us"
You have no idea who said that
Your vision become more blurry then it was and all you see are blurred colors and your ears start to ring

Soon everything goes black and you feel yourself hit the floor. You hear some muffled screams and gasps