Dusty caught up to Rarity as she was about to board her platform. "Rarity, I love you! Please forgive me for m-"
He never even saw the slap coming, and quickly fell unconscious against the train platform.
"What an uncouth stallion you are! I can't believe I had even agreed to lunch with you!" With a huff, Rarity boarded the train back home for Ponyville, leaving Dusty's prone form on that wooden platform while never looking back.
A word from the Author:
I'm sorry if this pisses you off, but as I said earlier I'm not very good at writing. The story felt like it was taking forever to develop at times, and then I felt that my characters were acting OOC at other times. I finally got fed up with the lack of cohesiveness and just decided to end it before it got worse.
Over all, this was a good experience for me writing, but it's not the quality of work I wanted to create.
Oh well, I guess I'll have to work on it.
Regards, Cloud Shaker