So I posted this on here and I got a ton of comments flaming, err I should choose a nicer word, criticizing my story for the plot being a usual HiE and that I should write something more original. Sorry that I didn't surf the HiE to see if some people had my plot, I'm kind of stupid xD. So I'm gonna try and write another story that people will like. So, if you have any plot ideas just put it in the comments or PM me and I'll take them into consideration. (The only thing that annoys me here two people who apparently didn't even read the chapter and disliked for the description.. judging a book by its cover much? e.e)