FOE story mixed with FO4, meet the Sole Survivor of Stable 111 Fast Times, a colt from before the great war who's spent 90% of the time since in cryo sleep. But something goes wrong on his last time in the freezer...
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Well Fast sure did something quite shocking.
Should have added a perk in at the end there. 'Daddys little girl'. Have your bartering go up 10% when glitter is in your party. Although i'm only up to chapter 11, you may have added something similar later on. Love this Story so far though, KEEP IT UP! On to the next chapter.
This "nice mare" wouldn't happened to be a unicorn with a white coat, red eyes and a black and red mane would it ?
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And would those eyes happen to glow in the dark as well?
ahh jade has developed and reliases she can't keep him to herself all the time "you make me happy" you know that sounds very close to love
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puns man...why?
The first mention of Nick!!!! I look forward to that
I wonder if fast is like me and loves his food charred on the outside. Princesss food sounds amazing
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Aw shit she is pretty awful at singing to I heard
Jades possessiveness is getting a bit annoying; commanding fast around like that was a bit endearing at the start but it kinda went to far after awhile.
Besides that this is great so far, I'm hoping fast grows more into that leadership position and starts getting more involved with the role; right now he just kinda feels there, like he's not really ingaged with it.
Holy crap, Jade just used a contraction.
(She also used doesn’t at a different point here, but I couldn’t find it)
More slice of life, an adorable adoption, and little Fasts first ghoul encounter!
WEW I AM LOVING THIS STORY!
I also like how Annoyed Fast is getting with the mission texts, and how they were implemented into the story.
Still good.
Way Back Home is such an amazing song when the text is the only thing presented to you. Not that the song’s bad, but the lyrics themselves have a certain charm to them.
I also forgot Glitter did everypony’s bartering. Also, the whole “you’re my daddy” thing at the end makes her even more precious.
In fact that entire final scene is special, especially those last two paragraphs. On my first read-through, I was merely taking a passive interest in the story, but those last two paragraphs are the first moment in this story where I knew we were gonna get along well, when I realized this story was going to be great. Those words are what home feels like. There’s certainly more great scenes, especially as the writing improved throughout the 4 years, but that’s the first real great one.
As for Hexington, I kind of wished it actually existed in the game proper. Then again, the entire Commonwealth of Massachusetts is a rather large area to aimlessly wander around, so I simply might not’ve discovered it.
I'm curious about these "esoteric areas of magic"