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This one took a little longer than planned, due to school, extra work for my editor, and maybe kinda sorta all these games that came out in a short time span...
But finals are over, class is done for the summer, and the giant initial surge of "OMG NEW GAMES" is over, so I've already made good progress on the next chapter before even getting this one up. Not to mention there's some really interesting stuff coming up soon that I'm really looking forward to writing!
7301080 What do I spy with my anthropod eye?
Plz tell me u play Total War Warhammer. I need people who would be my ground forces when I rape vampires with my PEGASUS KNIGHT!
Oh, we'll finally see why exactly Sickle stopped being raider and now dislikes them so? Good. More Sickle is always good.
More changelings too. Good chapter :)
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That was, indeed, one of the games I've been playing. Already brought chaos to the world, currently in the middle of settling all the grudges. Though that's on pause for a different game while I resolve one of the more unusual World War IIs I've seen (Italy started crumbling thanks to the South African naval invasion of Sicily, and the massive Australian naval invasion of the baltic coast of Germany was the decisive maneuver that broke the German army; now I'm looking warily at Russia as they gobble up the Middle East). And then I'll probably take over the galaxy once more, and I really need to get around to finally kicking some demon butts, and maybe build another sprawling factory complex. And all of this on top of my regular military-manshoots/PTSD-simulator sessions, and the weekly
drill-babysittingbank-robbering with the roommates. So much to do!7301158 Set ALL the grudges, waiting for Kislev DLC and currently raining airborn horse poop on enemy artylery. It's an addiction. We have to play together one day.
Battlefleet Gothic today, Dawn of War 3 tommorow, right?
I love this fanfic. :)
Whisper is a mare of my heart.
Fun little update, and doubly so for the nature of duplicity!
Well, that must've been fun for Whisper.
I'm liking Sickle more and more.
And thus they are a team and they're gonna take some names.
Hell yes.
Mfw this story updates
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I really like how this chapter went. The realism is almost tangible ("bad air" and gun maintenance being the best examples).
7301198 aaand now im going to watch the sky whenever i go outside. pegusis pulling a seagull. pegisis fly by crap bombing!!
After the Ubisoft e3 presentation (nothing but crap except maybe "For Honor" and the new South Park game), I was so overjoyed to see this had an update.
You saved the evening and night for me kind sir.
7301675 It's real dangerous stuff. An average horse drop is around 3 kilos of weight, propelled by the gravity it has a pretty big impact. Can break a neck if it hit you in a bad angle. And it relises metanium, that can be a little explosive if there is a torch nearby so it can set cloth near the torch on fire for example., all that granted it doesn't have bird pooperties...
I just finished re-reading this last night. I'm very happy with the timing.
We haven't seen the alicorn in a while. Anyone want to put money on her showing up at the mine?
7301769 lmao poopertys. nice
This gave me a really cool mental image. One that I might try to draw for lighting practice.
This chapter wasn't particularly exciting, compared to the last two.
Nonetheless, it had its own extremely satisfying payoff and, I think, provided a necessary breather episode.
Is that the mine I think it is?
Ali-corn! Ali-corn! Ali-corn!
The SS StarWhisper is back to sailing! All aboard!
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Should we perhaps be making room in the party for an alicorn?
Also I just realized Whisper is inevitably going to meet Fluttershy, and it'll probably be the most sad/happy thing ever.
7301080 I wait with vibrating anticipation.
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I really love putting in details like that! I'm glad other people do, too
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Glad I could make your night a little better!
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Good timing!
As for what'll happen at the mine... I ain't sayin' nothin'.
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Ooh! If you do, let me know. I'd love to see that!
Yeah, no action or mayhem this time, but hopefully some nice character moments. And yes, that mine!
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FULL SPEED AHEAD!
7302779 you so will. Just not until you post the next chapter or 3 (I can wait that long, easy)
7302106 Thank you, comrade! There is a girl that got me properly into horsepuns and there was an opportunity, that's all.
7302927 well, a good pun will stick like glue.
7302939 ^^
Haha awesome, 2 weeks ago my tablet fell and broke and I just got a new one and was just reinstalling my book reader and stuff when pops the update email of this story.....A most excellent oportunity to test it
And really loving the story so far, love the character of Sickle a lot, she takes no s*** from anyone hehe
....But seriously cant wait to read more char develpement.
YEAAAAAH! it updated!
and oooh....sealed fire hazard almost got em....noice "build up" there X3
7301080 I get the feeling for school, I just wrapped up recently as well.
Excellent chapter as usual.
Well, or they were set to ignore changelings, somehow
But if I remember correctly she kind of left the place unpowered, anyway.
I thought these things contained a lamp?
Also, way to crank up the changeling-ness of the place. Green glow, lol.
Ah. And here I thought that that was the whole point of their cooperation. I suppose, when push comes to shove, it's still just every pony for themselves
"But hey, I survived. Can't say I'm particularly unhappy about that fact, y'know?"
If it's for your fat ass, you should get them yourself!
Looks like someone agrees with me
Ah yes. I suppose changeling transformation in a pitch black room must be rather... flashy
Looks like that's gonna take quite some effort to get used to, heh...
Well look freaking around you, Dusty. You think these Crystal Life ponies managed to make a facility like this without knowing what they were?
Been saying that since the start
Um. Do changelings have eyebrows? I don't think she shifted back to her disguise...
They held ponies. Who all died when the facility powered down!
Ohhhh. Gas leak?
Ah. CO/CO2 poisoning. Right. The only plus compared to a gas leak is that at least there's no chance of anything blowing up
Heh. The SPP. But that does mean it sank reeeeally deep into what was essentially an armoured bunker...
Aw yiss, candy bars!
Heh. What a pity. (Keep Sickle away from that bone saw! )
Well, damn. She clearly stole the right wagon
Well, they were called "badlands" before the bombs, so for all you know right now it's "happy grassy magic frolick fields"
Ooh. Starlight used Diplomacy! It's super effective!
That weird fucked-in-the-head alicorn camped there, though
Remarks and corrections:
> “She was laying right here,” I said, dipping my muzzle.
"She was [lying] right here"
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When I first dug through it, I just found reference to making the PipBuck "glow like a lamp", which I figured meant making the screen glow brighter like in the games. But I just dug a little more, and there's talk about turning on the PipBuck's light, which might suggest otherwise... unless that's like saying she turned on the "flashlight" screen mode (Like some mobile phone "flashlight" apps). Hrm...
Hmm? Who said anything about cooperation?
Well, they don't have hairy eyebrows like mammals do, but they have a brow above their eyes that they could do similar gestures with. I suppose I could change it to just "brow", I just wasn't sure if it would be clear enough...
Probably several meters of earth and a thin layer of steel. But it was also a house-sized shard of structural steel that struck edge-on. Most of it is probably still sticking out on the back-side of that hill.
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Uhh... surely those Crystal Life ponies didn't develop stasis tech based on changeling cocoons without knowing they were dealing with changelings?
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Oh, of course not. They developed stasis tech that had nothing to do with changeling cocoons. Then the changelings came in, with information collected from their infiltration of CLT, tore out and discarded several parts of the suspended animation pods (The discarded white shells in the back of the room), and integrated changeling cocoons with the important parts from CLT's development. Which they may or may not have helped nudge along to begin with. Whisper isn't entirely clear on the extent of her hive's involvement with CLT, though more clues may come later.
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Ack! Biggs is invading from my other story!
Fixed
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Was re-reading this to refresh my memory before catching up, and noticed this:
> I nodded. “It was not the most welcoming of places to have woken up.”
Should be "to have woken up [to/in]." As it is, the sentence kinda means she woke up the place
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Heh! If it was any other character, I'd probably just pass it off as them speaking informally, but Whisper really knows better.
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Yeah, if it were Sickle I wouldn't have bothered
Finally made an account here so I can properly find my place reading your story. First long story I've read sine FoE: Homelands :)
You dropped an apostrophe.
Heart warming.
Bout time they went back to kill those FUCKING raiders. Xp
IF the socket she needed was a 10mm then this is entirely unrealistic everyone knows that 10mm sockets dont exist! how else would you explain all of them dissapearing!