197 years after the Great War, tension is growing on the west coast of Equestria. Follow the journey of one stallion and his friends as a great race against time begins.
6791790 Thanks for commenting! Gamma and I will try to tone down the "woe is me" in future chapters, though it does need to remain a little bit as that is part of his character at this current time. Once again, thank you for commenting and leaving feedback! Almost no one does this anymore and it's really good to see comments like this
Okay, another chapter down, however many more to go! It was a great chapter, it didn't fly by so fast I couldn't tell what was going on, or drag on for hours and hours, and the whole raider chase and battle was really well written, and I could get a really good picture of what was going on. Then he held a foal hostage and I was like, "This is f**king intense!" Anyways, great chapter! Moving on to the next one now!
6791790 Thanks for commenting! Gamma and I will try to tone down the "woe is me" in future chapters, though it does need to remain a little bit as that is part of his character at this current time. Once again, thank you for commenting and leaving feedback! Almost no one does this anymore and it's really good to see comments like this
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an alright start, nothing with a bang, but the main character is solid, and the pacing is good. I'll keep on this,, like with the last one.
Okay, another chapter down, however many more to go! It was a great chapter, it didn't fly by so fast I couldn't tell what was going on, or drag on for hours and hours, and the whole raider chase and battle was really well written, and I could get a really good picture of what was going on. Then he held a foal hostage and I was like, "This is f**king intense!" Anyways, great chapter! Moving on to the next one now!