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Awesome chapter! Your descriptions of aerial combat are excellent... I could almost see the battle unfolding in front of me.
I just hope I can do something similar in my story.
Keep em coming!
Ah man, that mare though. She seemed like someone that definitely didn't want to be there doing that.
Then again, they did take out three Steel Rangers.
My only question is why didn't she use a couple nades and blow it up; that is the AM rifle.
Can't wait for more!
Well that was a hell of a ride. I really liked getting to see Snap be tactical again, and the whole chapter was a treat for that reason alone.
I gotta say though, the strongest moment for me, personally, was Snap's kill of Jasmine. That was brutal, and you wrote that entire segment perfectly, at least for me. It legitimately chilled me the way you described her death, and it was somewhat satisfying to see that same feeling mirrored in Snap's own thoughts, even if it did cost her in combat. Also, the fact that there was no hesitation during the act, only after, also sold it to me.
Beyond that, the aerial dogfight was a great read, and once I got into this, I just tore thought the whole chapter. Great stuff again man, looking forward to the next one!
Relentless? promise me you finish this wonderful story and not let it die like the hundred other ones? please?